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Post by Haileadorable211 7/24/2010, 9:16 pm


What I am
Is not your place
The darkness will not reach me
What I am
I feel the wind
On my skin and It comsumes me
What I am
What I am
Is not your place
To tell me
I feel what I feel
The darkness creeps but I dont flinch
What I am
Im being consumed
What I am
The butterflys cry
What I am
Im suffocating
In the this pressure
But i must succeed
What I am
I cant speak
Oh im suffocating
I cant hear
Oh mind is blank
The ravens will swarm
Will their ravenous hunger
Until Nothing Is left
Am I justified
Am I entitled to my opinion
My constutuion is getting wearker
I dont know
I dont know
WHAT I AM

-This was based on my real life and the nervous breakdown I had at 3:00 LET ME SAY WHAT I WANT TO SAY <---------- rantalicious
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Post by amrgirl 7/25/2010, 12:01 pm

Great job! I like it. Smile
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/26/2010, 10:31 pm

awesome!
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