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Ninja Academy - A Naruto RP - Part 7 *Note added!*

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Post by itachiphan8823 8/17/2009, 12:23 pm

"I'm not worried about myself," I told her. "You're the only thing that matters to me." I made it to the hospital. I went to open the door...and I collapsed. When I collapsed, Ashke fell on the handle of the knife. The blade went the whole way into my body. I fell into the darkness once again.

(They'll be fine Mia! LOL)

I played a red skip. "Ino, I mean Uno!" I started laughing. I then played my Draw 4 Wild. "Looks like I won this game." I looked at her and said, "Is your headache gone yet?"

(Sorry it was a typo and I just went with it!)
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/17/2009, 12:24 pm

(LOL. XD)

"No... I think it got worse." I said putting the rest of my cards on the table.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/17/2009, 12:25 pm

((Okay itachi.. your freaking me out now.... D= I thought I mentioned I HATED horror movies? smug Their gonna.. DIEEEE!! *freaks out* *runs in circles*))

She just lay there, eyes closed, breathing slowly.. very slowly.. fading away.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/17/2009, 12:27 pm

I got up out of the chair. I was nervous. I said, "I'm calling the nurse to get the doctor." I walked over to the bed and reached for the call button.

(Mia breath! Just breath! I love horror movies, but I wouldn't make either of them die. P.S.:You never told me you didn't like horror movies! LOL I wouldn't kill off Maikeru. You'll see where I'm going with this soon enough. It's going to affect Maikeru really, really badly.)
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/17/2009, 12:28 pm

(Guys if I don't post right away, it;s because I'm working on my Senior High Literature homework. Which involves reading the rest of chapter 2 of The Scarlet Letter.)

"Make it quick... ow..." I held my head in my hands because it was hurting so badly.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/17/2009, 12:31 pm

I couldn't believe what I saw. Ashke was laying on top of my chest and I was unconscious underneath her. The hospital staff were freaking out. They came and got Ashke off of me. They tried to take me first, but I heard myself say, "Take her." They took Ashke and carried her into the hospital. It was a few seconds before they came out and got me. I lost view of them carrying me, and everything went black.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/17/2009, 12:32 pm

((shocked I mentioned it on today's blo.. how I watched Orphan.. I mentioned in the coments my hate for horror movies.. I beleive. smug..))

Is Maikeru alright? Am I still alive? Where am I? Am I alright? Does Maikeru still live? So many questions... so little time... is death making its way to me now? Am I at the tip of death.. like.. at the tip of a knife.. am I.. dead? I need to know if Maikeru's alright.. but how? I can't even move, my eyes won't open, I hear nothing but myself asking these questions... where am I....?
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/17/2009, 12:35 pm

((How convenient. I'm listening to "I don't care" by Apocalyptica... and they say "If you were dead or still alive" alot.. smug Convenient at a time like this... huh? XD ))
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/17/2009, 12:38 pm

The darkness cleared. I found Ashke laying front of me. The doctors were running around like crazy. They were trying to put more blood back into her body. "She lost so much," I heard them say, "She wouldn't have made it if that boy wouldn't have carried her here." I started to bawl. She almost died. I walked over to her body and fell to my knees. I continued to bawl. I went to grab her hand, but mine went through it. So I put my hands around it. "She'll be fine," I heard one of the doctors say, "We just need one more pint of blood, to put back in her, and then she's good to go." I was so thrilled that she was going to live. Then I realized. Would I live to see her smile at me again? My crying got so bad, that I started to convulse. Then the darkness took me again.

(Just a little! LOL)

I hit the call button and said, "Get the doctor in here right away! Her headache hasn't gone away!" I was so annoyed that I didn't even wait to hear a response. I told Brittani, "He'll be in, in a minute." I bent down and kissed her on her forehead. "It's going to be okay," I told her.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/17/2009, 12:41 pm

((Stupid songs. I hear certain songs at bad times. T-T))

She still had her eyes closed, though, she thought back at all those good times with Maikeru. She couldn't keep her mind on the fact that she couldn't move ... she wanted to think of positive things.
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/17/2009, 12:43 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:I hit the call button and said, "Get the doctor in here right away! Her headache hasn't gone away!" I was so annoyed that I didn't even wait to hear a response. I told Brittani, "He'll be in, in a minute." I bent down and kissed her on her forehead. "It's going to be okay," I told her.

"ow... I hope you're right..."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/17/2009, 12:46 pm

The darkness cleared once more. As soon as it cleared, I heard, "This isn't good at all!" I looked and they were standing over my body. "I knew it. I wouldn't get to see Ashke again." I started going into hysterics. Then I heard them say, "He'll live, there's no doubt, but there'll be some...complications." I didn't know what they meant. My hysterics only got worse. "Like what kind of complications doctor?" I heard the nurse ask him. He looked at her and said, "..." Darkness.

I didn't know what could be wrong with her. I think I knew why, but I wasn't going to make an assumption. I waited patiently for the doctor to come...but he didn't.

(The doctor is working on Maikeru or Ashke. That's what I'm going by. Just wanted to inform you.)
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/17/2009, 12:47 pm

(That's ok with me. I'm trying to read the rest of chapter 2 of my book.)

"Where is he?"
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/17/2009, 12:49 pm

((Now.. Life is Beautiful is playing.. then Bring Me To Life. Stupid songs! TEIRBBLE timings!!))
((Dang. Bring Me To Life is playing. HEY! It fits the situations PERFECTLY! XD))

I need to go see Maikeru! I can't open my eyes.. why? I can't leave him alone .. I need to go see him, know how he is .. know if were going to live! Someone .. answer my questions ... please.
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"I don't know! I'm not going to call her again! I'm going to see her in person!" I told Brittani. I asked her, "Is it alright if I go see where he is? I don't want to leave you here alone, but I'll be right back. Do you mind?"

The darkness continued to circle around me. I said, "Why haven't I returned to my body? What was wrong with me?" I was getting so worried, that I started have an anxiety attack. I was starting to hyperventilate when I seen a light. I started walking toward the light. My parents appeared in front of me. I started bawling. They said, "Come to us, our son." They had huge smiles on their faces. Then Ashke appeared behind me. I heard her say, "Come to me Maikeru. I love you." I stopped in my tracks. Which one do I choose? The only family I've ever had? Or the love of my life?' I though. I took one step toward...

(Listen to My Immortal by: Evanescence. That's my favorite song of theirs. I think it fits Maikeru to a "T.")
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Ashke thought in horror, of Maikeru dying, just seeing him on the ground with the knife stabbed in, him bleeding.. this was a nightmare.. the worst she's had. She opened her eyes so quickly, with a loud scream of terror, saying: "MAIKERU!!"
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/17/2009, 1:02 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:"I don't know! I'm not going to call her again! I'm going to see her in person!" I told Brittani. I asked her, "Is it alright if I go see where he is? I don't want to leave you here alone, but I'll be right back. Do you mind?"

"I'll be fine. Just... go get my doctor!"
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/17/2009, 1:12 pm

((Bet he's working on a long post again. XP))
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/17/2009, 1:14 pm

(Yup.)
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((Usually when he takes time to reply.. it means a long post is comming our way.))
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I opened my eyes. 'What just happened to me? Had i almost died?' I thought. I took a step toward my parents, and then I heard Ashke scream my name. I then fell into perpetual darkness. Then I woke up. "Ashke..." I tried to scream but the I had unbearable pain in my chest. I went to clutch it and now I was in searing pain. I screamed out in pain, putting myself in more pain. The nurse came in and gave me a shot. The pain subsided after a few minutes, and then I fell into darkness.

I left the room and went to the nurses station. I knocked on the glass and screamed, "We need the doctor in Brittani's room right now! She thought she had a headache, but it got worse! She's had it for a couple hours now! If you don't send the doctor in in the next 5 minutes, I'm hunting him down!" I walked away and entered Brittani's room. I looked at her and said sweetly, "There sending him in right now. He didn't answer his pages."

(Crap!!! I have to go grocery shopping for my mom with my sister! *Groans & Sighs* This is sooooo good! I don't want to stop! I'll get back on ASAP when I get back. Crap! I don't want to go!)

(I hit the backspace button when something was highlighted. It took me to the previous page. I lost everything and had to rewrite!)
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/17/2009, 1:20 pm

((XD That happens to me so much. I write I wack load, I accidentaly hit back space, I get angry, and restart. XD))
((Awww..... Bye... sad PM me or something when you get back on! I MIGHT still be here. If I'm NOT on TWG, come get me on WI.))

She lay there, gazing upwards, sighing once. "Maikeru..." she whispered sadly. I'm surely alive now.. and seems like he is as well. she thought, trying to fight a smile through. "Is Maikeru alright?" she asked them ... of course she wasn't as bad as before now. "Have you removed the knife?" she added. So many questions again, so little time ... so little answers. A fews tears slipped from her eyes. What if Maikeru died? It would take her forever to find someone to replace him .. maybe she'd never find someone, who was like him. She lay there now, thinking deeply about what happened. What happened? Had Zore died? Did Maikeru go against Zore, and try to kill him? All she could remember, was the knife lashing at her so many times ... Zore had killed her parents long ago, if he was dead, she was glad. But Zore had a crush on her? That's why he killed her parents .. so many things remained unexplained. "But I love Maikeru.." she whispered, closing her eyes, as the tears slipped down. She hoped this day would never happen again ... she didn't want to die next time, at all, hopefully there was no next time .. like this. Hopefully the next time, wouldn't be a violent time. Did they finally take the knife out of him? she asked silently, in her mind. Hopefully they did .... Hopefully ...

((I has an idea. What if next part ; Part 8, is a couple of years later? Some of the couples would be married of course. NOTE: Couples who had children, will have to be AT LEAST 4 years old. (The kids would be 4.. not the parents. XD).. and remember,... if their going to have another kid, you wait for the next book. At the next book, you can pretend they already had the kid. XP .. Kk peeps? =) ))


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itachiphan8823 wrote:I left the room and went to the nurses station. I knocked on the glass and screamed, "We need the doctor in Brittani's room right now! She thought she had a headache, but it got worse! She's had it for a couple hours now! If you don't send the doctor in in the next 5 minutes, I'm hunting him down!" I walked away and entered Brittani's room. I looked at her and said sweetly, "There sending him in right now. He didn't answer his pages."

(Crap!!! I have to go grocery shopping for my mom with my sister! *Groans & Sighs* This is sooooo good! I don't want to stop! I'll get back on ASAP when I get back. Crap! I don't want to go!)

(I hit the backspace button when something was highlighted. It took me to the previous page. I lost everything and had to rewrite!)

(Ok! I'll be working on my Literature stuff!)

"He'd better hurry up... I think it's getting worse..."
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((Edited my post. I left a message for everyone to read..))
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(Oh, Mia! That sounds great! I love it! I mean, they can't be teenagers forever! XD)
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