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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 3/2/2010, 6:28 pm

Shadow Knows Our Last Name
Based off of a dream

Maturity: Very low, but this will turn into a romance story so there will probably be a lot of kissing <3
Fantasy: There's some fantasy stuff in the beginning....like stuff magically popping up I guess? But that's going away....xD Romance now..... nod

Chapter 1: The Mistake
Slowly, I got out of my bed sleepily. I walked downstairs into the dark room to get onto the computer. I looked around expecting my dad to already be there.
I turned on the computer impatiently, for it always takes so long for it to power on.
I moaned, breaking the dead silence.
The computer finally turned on and I immediatly clicked on internet explorer and typed in 'shadowsowner888.com'.
There seemed to be nothing new there, so I just looked around at the different poems. Amazingly, my brother had posted a poem. Confused, I clicked on the poem and started reading.

The skies are blue as well as the ocean,
but hearts are red and so is blood

By Charles Jones


I started screaming and ran up to my brother's room. 'Why would he put his real last name on there?' I thought to myself.
I got inside and he was just there sleeping not knowing what was going on!
I tried to wake him up, but he wouldn't.
Out of no where, a paper bag poofed on his floor that read:

The skies are blue as well as the ocean,
but hearts are red and so is blood

By Charles Jones

The letters were pink and swirly. I was quite confused.
I continued staring at the bag when suddenly, the top half of all of the word were cut in half, as if a sword had cut them. Somehow, I knew that shadow was involved with this.
I raced downstairs not bothering to shut my brother's door behind me.
The dark room was no longer dark because of the computer's light.
I still had the website up and refreshed the page that had my brother's poem. Just like the paper bag, half of the letters had disappeared.
I went to the chatbox and logged on.
Shadow was already there waiting for me.
amazon has joined the chat 3/1/10 4:11 pm
@shadowsowner888: >: D hehehehe
amazon: ?
@shadowsowner888: hehehehehe! I know you're last name! >: D
amazon: Don't tell anyone!
@shadowsowner888: JEN JONES XD
all the members of TWIG have joined the chat.
amazon: -_-'

Chapter 2: What's Wrong With Shadow?
I growled and quickly typed a tried to erase the message from shadow. I learned that on forumotion sites, on chatboxes, you can type in "/clr" or "/clear" to delete messages. I did not know that only mods could do that.

amazon: /clear
@shadowsowner888: HA!!!!!! ROFLMBO
amazon: )':
@shadowsowner888: ONLY IIIIIIIII CAN DO THAT! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!
amazon: shadow, why are you doing this?
@shadowsowner888: DON'T call me shadow. Call me Princess Shadow. Bow down to me. All of you.
amazon: ......?
@shadowsowner888: BOW!
amazon: *bows*
@shadowsowner888: thank you.
amazon oinks.
@shadowsowner888: Pig, bow down.
amazon's pig bows down.
@shadowsowner888: Good.
amazon logged off.

I sighed. Something was up with shadow. My cell phone started ringing my ringtone that goes "Beep da beeeeeep da beeeep beeeeeeeeeep". I didn't want my brother to wake up. He already messed things up. I answered it. "Hello?"
"Hi." Said a low yet female voice.
"Who is this?"
"Stephanie"
"Stephanie who?"
"Stephanie MEYER!"
"OMG! Can I have your autograph?"
"I'm not Stepanie Meyer."
"Then why'd ya say you where?"
Stephanie didn't answer. I heard a short click then a beeping sound.
A quick high voiced robot woman answered and said, "If you would like to call someone, please hang up and dial. One---"
I cut the machine off. "Grrr. Stupid Stephanie Meyer. Who knew she would do hang up calls."
The doorbell rang. I walked ontop of my dark navy blue sofa to look out the window to see who it was. There was a girl, turned around. It looked a lot like my friend, Hannah. I jumped off of the sofa and quickly ran up the stairs, then to the door, hoping I didn't take to long.
I opened the door and Hannah wasn't there. Instead, a much taller version of Hannah was standing there.
I wasn't sure what to do, so I slammed the door shut. The girl's foot stepped foward, stopping the door. Her shoes were covered in fresh brown mud.
I slammed my body against the door. I hoped the mud wouldn't make a mark on the clean, bright white door.
She did the same.
We both angrily started throwing our bodies at the door. My arm ached with a throbbing pain.
The girl yet slammed her body against the door. I did the same, but my head slammed into the door instead of my arm. I started feeling dizzy. I uncontrollably fell to the ground.
The girl stepped in with an evil grin on her face. "Hi amazon."
The world was spinning and the girl was splitting into three, moving around. "Shadow?" I whispered before I blacked out.

Chapter 3: Who the heck is that dude?
-While Jen is out-
A tall man smashed through the door.
Stephanie smiled somewhat of an evil smile. "Hey"
"Hey," replied the man, flipping is brown bangs to the side of his head.
Stephanie stood up and walked away from Jen. "I miss you," she said pulling the man towards her. With the blink of an eye, they were locking lips.
The man's stubby fingers managed their way through Stephanie's hair.
Stephanie pulled away with her eyebrows raised. "We have work to do."
"Oh yeah," the man said. His hand went behind his head as if he were embarrassed. "I forgot". His cheeks slowly turned a light shade of pink. He only wanted Stephanie, nothing else.
Stephanie smiled then wrapped her fingers with his. "We have to be quick before she wakes up." Stephanie whispered to the man.
"Okay. What should I do?"
"Find the knife".
The man's fingers slowly left her's. He left the room and traveled to the kitchen. He looked around but couldn't find a knife. "Stephanie!" He whispered in a loud-ish whisper.
"What!" She replied in the same tone.
"Can you find it?"
Stepanie moaned then went to the kitchen. She quickly pulled a sharp knife out of the dishwasher. She slowly headed back over to the sleeping Jen and pointed the knife at Jen's back.

I woke up. "What the heck?" I leaped away from Stephanie. Who the heck is that guy?

Chapter 4: Shadow's a......killer?
I stared at the guy with a weird expression on my face.
"I'm Kert" he said.
I kept the expression on my face. "Nice to meet you....umm are you Stephanie's boyfriend?"
"No," Stephanie said. "He's my brother" she said sarcastically.
"I sure hope I'm not" Kert said, not understanding Stephanie's joke.
Stephanie moaned then slowly started walking toward me. "Abgray erhay anday ingbray erhay otay emay!" ('Grab her and bring her to me' in pig latin)
"Okay" Kurt mumbled.
I wondered what they were saying.
Kert leaped (literally) and grabbed me. I tried to fight my way out, but I couldn't. He was pretty strong.
Stephanie came with the knife. "You shall DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE!!"
I screamed and Kert covered my mout.
Stephanie pulled a giant spider off my back, set it on the floor, then stabbed it five times. Kert let go of me then stepped on the spider to make sure it was dead.
I stared at them in disbelief.
Stephanie smiled.
"So.....are you still evil?" I asked Stephanie.
"Evil?" She replied. "I never thought I was being evil! Just some pranks.....then I saw that stupid spider on your back and it just had to go."
Kert stepped closer to Stephanie.
Stephanie stepped away from Kert.
Kert stepped closer to Stephanie.
"Stop it!" Stephanie stepped away from Kert.
"I'm in love with you, Stephanie!"
Stephanie's eyes widened when she heard this. Her face turned red. She looked over to me.
Kert stepped closer to Stephanie looking anxious.
Stephanie remanied where she was. She burried her face into Kert's chest. "I think I love you, too" Stephanie whispered.
"Aww" I said smiling.
Stephanie and Kert kissed and I waited for them to stop.


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Post by shadowsowner888 3/2/2010, 7:39 pm

xD OMG. I seem so evil!!

If your name really was Jones, that'd be pretty cool. Surprised It's like Indiana Jones!
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Post by Avé 3/2/2010, 7:42 pm

Shadow is right. Are you related to Indiana Jones? That would be epic. xD

Anyway, awesome story. Very Happy
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 3/2/2010, 7:43 pm

Okay...my last name isn't Jones o.o and my brother's name isn't Charles XD

Thank you for the comments and reading it =)

In my dreams...the good peopleare always evil. Its weird....
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Post by Avé 3/2/2010, 7:45 pm

I know that. xD But it would still be epic.
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 3/2/2010, 8:40 pm

XD

But is Indiana Jones even real? o.o'
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/2/2010, 10:27 pm

Lawl. XD

And I'm nowhere amongst the truly evil of your dreams? o,o SHOCKING. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/3/2010, 5:04 pm

I bet you'd be some happy little fairy, Mia, if I'm an evil creeper. xD
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 3/3/2010, 5:08 pm

I didn't mean to hurt your feelings shadow. I can't control my dreams like you do. =/
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/3/2010, 5:15 pm

An happy little fairy? O,o

Amazon.. if that ever happens.. let me know. XD
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 3/3/2010, 5:16 pm

I will =)

XD
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Post by Crystal Aura 3/3/2010, 5:21 pm

Remarkable, Amazon! cheesy
But that dream is just... spine-chilling.
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 3/3/2010, 5:41 pm

Thank you =3
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/3/2010, 6:58 pm

Don't worry, you didn't hurt my feelings at all, Jen. ^^ I just find it cool that you even dreamed about me at all.
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Post by rattyjol 3/3/2010, 8:09 pm

Erm... creeeeeepy. o.0

More? Very Happy
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 3/3/2010, 9:29 pm

Hehe there was this one part of the dream that I didn't include. You're face showed up during the chat when you said, "Hehehe! >: D I know you're last name!" I didn't include that though XP


Thanks for reading, Ratty =3 I'll probably write more.....hopefully XD
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Post by Arianna 3/25/2010, 1:15 am

Coughcoughcough - WHAT WERE YOU DOING USING INTERNET EXPLORER?

Use Chrome. Seriously. Razz

And Shad knows my last name. Most people here know it, I think.
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Post by Mordor 3/25/2010, 1:28 am

Epic
Your quite evil, Shadow xD
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Post by Blue Aqua Wind 3/25/2010, 7:25 am

lol. xD
this is epic. :3
ahaa, and quite creepy. [x
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/25/2010, 11:58 am

I know lots of last names! Very Happy I know Ari's, and Newms's, and Smitchie of WI's (though I forgot it), and Amy of WI's . . . I feel like a major stalker, except, I wasn't looking for that stuff. xD

Hehe, and yes, I am evil. Very Happy You should fear me.
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Post by Mordor 3/25/2010, 1:01 pm

I can see that, you sig has been warning for a quite a while xD
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Post by Shadowlover2000 3/31/2010, 10:55 am

wait... you hash a chat bar??
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/31/2010, 1:23 pm

Yeah, we do. Smile It's at the bottom of the main forum page.
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Post by Shadowlover2000 4/1/2010, 8:33 pm

K Very Happy thanks!
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Post by ~>*Alexis*<~ 4/2/2010, 2:59 pm

Nice...and creepy. XD
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