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Post by shadowsowner888 9/13/2009, 10:13 am

Maturity: Me talking about driving when I don't know how! Very Happy Woot! (And maybe some heartbreak. xP)
Fantasy: None


This is not a true poem, but it's based on Jamie. xD When I found out about his supposed crush on Bridget, I considered how I should have been feeling, and wrote something about that. And I made a video of me singing this and playing guitar for it . . . with Gri's computerized drums in the back. :3 Check it out.
https://shadowsowner888.forumotion.net/music-f55/omg-no-way-shadow-can-sing-t2450.htm#132754

[guitar intro]

There’s something wrong with my head;
I’m driving home again.
But this time is the last time.

My heart feels like it’s dead,
Because of what’s been said.
And nothing will change my mind.

I could’ve done so much btter,
But I had to waste my time.
I didn’t know you at all-------.

Na na, na na-na, na-na-na.

[repeat intro]

CHORUS
Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone.

[strum through chords]

Staring out my window,
To the dark depths of the night. . . .
Crying as hard as the clouds are.

Why do I feel so low?
For once I wannt to die. . . .
I let things to too far.

I could’ve done so much better,
But I had to waste my life.
I was chasing after a foooooool’s dream.

Na-da, na, da-da, da-da-da.

[strum through chords]

Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone.

[strum through alt chords]

BRIDGE
You. You never cared,
I. I know that now,
You. Were not the one I
Needed, whooaaa-hoh,

You. You never wanted me,
No, I see it's true.
You. Were just a hope, a
Dream I chased,
Cus I believed in you.

Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone,
What it's like to be alone,
What it's like to be alooone.


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Post by Boballoo123 9/13/2009, 1:33 pm

Aw, that's really good Shadow! It's sad, but good.
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Post by Amber 9/13/2009, 2:35 pm

I love it!!
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/14/2009, 9:39 am

Thanks, Nadine and Amber. Smile
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Post by Komoda 9/18/2009, 10:04 pm

Ooh, I like this so far, Ado! The rhyming's great! I mean, it doesn't rhyme like every line but it gives it just enough oomph without being too much. Not that having it rhyme every line is too much, but... You know what I mean. XP
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Post by PugsRock 9/18/2009, 10:05 pm

I like this one. Smile I love what you wrote in Maturity.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/18/2009, 10:08 pm

Thankies! x3 I'm glad you think so! Haha, yeah, sometimes it can be too much . . .

Thanks Pugs!! xD I do too.
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Post by Komoda 9/18/2009, 10:18 pm

You're welcome! And yeah, I agree.
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Post by Pokadottie 9/19/2009, 10:37 am

Wow! Really sad, but really good! So descriptive, but vague and the same time... [{omg}]
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Post by rattyjol 9/19/2009, 11:34 pm

That's amazing. It really fits with the melody I read it in. nod
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/20/2009, 11:51 am

Thanks Dottie! ^^ Haha, that's a lovely description.

x3 Thanks Ratty!
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/29/2009, 4:47 pm

I wrote more. Now I just need a bridge before I can finish the song. xD
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Post by rattyjol 10/18/2009, 7:16 pm

Should this not go onto Google Docs for editing until it's finished?
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Post by Horsey 10/19/2009, 3:54 pm

That's wonderful Shadow! Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/19/2009, 5:25 pm

Oh, oops. xD It's finished; I just forgot to post the rest. I'll get that taken care of.
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/6/2009, 8:02 pm

I have an important link on the front page now. x3
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