What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
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What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
Maturity: Me talking about driving when I don't know how! Woot! (And maybe some heartbreak. xP)
Fantasy: None
This is not a true poem, but it's based on Jamie. xD When I found out about his supposed crush on Bridget, I considered how I should have been feeling, and wrote something about that. And I made a video of me singing this and playing guitar for it . . . with Gri's computerized drums in the back. :3 Check it out.
https://shadowsowner888.forumotion.net/music-f55/omg-no-way-shadow-can-sing-t2450.htm#132754
[guitar intro]
There’s something wrong with my head;
I’m driving home again.
But this time is the last time.
My heart feels like it’s dead,
Because of what’s been said.
And nothing will change my mind.
I could’ve done so much btter,
But I had to waste my time.
I didn’t know you at all-------.
Na na, na na-na, na-na-na.
[repeat intro]
CHORUS
Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone.
[strum through chords]
Staring out my window,
To the dark depths of the night. . . .
Crying as hard as the clouds are.
Why do I feel so low?
For once I wannt to die. . . .
I let things to too far.
I could’ve done so much better,
But I had to waste my life.
I was chasing after a foooooool’s dream.
Na-da, na, da-da, da-da-da.
[strum through chords]
Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone.
[strum through alt chords]
BRIDGE
You. You never cared,
I. I know that now,
You. Were not the one I
Needed, whooaaa-hoh,
You. You never wanted me,
No, I see it's true.
You. Were just a hope, a
Dream I chased,
Cus I believed in you.
Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone,
What it's like to be alone,
What it's like to be alooone.
Fantasy: None
This is not a true poem, but it's based on Jamie. xD When I found out about his supposed crush on Bridget, I considered how I should have been feeling, and wrote something about that. And I made a video of me singing this and playing guitar for it . . . with Gri's computerized drums in the back. :3 Check it out.
https://shadowsowner888.forumotion.net/music-f55/omg-no-way-shadow-can-sing-t2450.htm#132754
[guitar intro]
There’s something wrong with my head;
I’m driving home again.
But this time is the last time.
My heart feels like it’s dead,
Because of what’s been said.
And nothing will change my mind.
I could’ve done so much btter,
But I had to waste my time.
I didn’t know you at all-------.
Na na, na na-na, na-na-na.
[repeat intro]
CHORUS
Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone.
[strum through chords]
Staring out my window,
To the dark depths of the night. . . .
Crying as hard as the clouds are.
Why do I feel so low?
For once I wannt to die. . . .
I let things to too far.
I could’ve done so much better,
But I had to waste my life.
I was chasing after a foooooool’s dream.
Na-da, na, da-da, da-da-da.
[strum through chords]
Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone.
[strum through alt chords]
BRIDGE
You. You never cared,
I. I know that now,
You. Were not the one I
Needed, whooaaa-hoh,
You. You never wanted me,
No, I see it's true.
You. Were just a hope, a
Dream I chased,
Cus I believed in you.
Sorry, boy, it didn’t work out,
So we’ll have to live without . . . each other.
You. Left. Me. With nothing but doubt,
So it’s your turn to know . . . what it’s like to be alone,
What it's like to be alone,
What it's like to be alooone.
Last edited by shadowsowner888 on 11/6/2009, 8:02 pm; edited 7 times in total
Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
Ooh, I like this so far, Ado! The rhyming's great! I mean, it doesn't rhyme like every line but it gives it just enough oomph without being too much. Not that having it rhyme every line is too much, but... You know what I mean. XP
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Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
I like this one. I love what you wrote in Maturity.
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Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
Thankies! x3 I'm glad you think so! Haha, yeah, sometimes it can be too much . . .
Thanks Pugs!! xD I do too.
Thanks Pugs!! xD I do too.
Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
You're welcome! And yeah, I agree.
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Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
Wow! Really sad, but really good! So descriptive, but vague and the same time... [{omg}]
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Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
That's amazing. It really fits with the melody I read it in.
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Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
Thanks Dottie! ^^ Haha, that's a lovely description.
x3 Thanks Ratty!
x3 Thanks Ratty!
Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
I wrote more. Now I just need a bridge before I can finish the song. xD
Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
Should this not go onto Google Docs for editing until it's finished?
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That's wonderful Shadow!
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Re: What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
Oh, oops. xD It's finished; I just forgot to post the rest. I'll get that taken care of.
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