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Post by Noah the Flood 8/29/2009, 3:31 pm

A Story with No Title - A story that is unambed written by Noah Python*

Maturity - ROmance, probably kissing, boyfriend girlfriend, the works. Death, violence, fighting, kidnappings..
Fantasy - Demons and Angels, possibly other creatures


Prologue

Pitter patter. Pitter patter. Pitter patter. Rain splattered against the ground outside the one odd house on Piviot Drive, Delaware. Even in the stormy weather where the clouds were as dark as the asphalt outside the house, it still stuck out like a beacon in the darkening world around it. The walls were not the normal white that most houses were, but a bright neon yellow with the darkest black shudders and door you could have ever seen. Outside were many rosebushes, and the grass seemed as green as green could get, the wet tear drops from the sky making it glisten ever so slightly as it started to cease, sunlight reaching through the clouds like snakes of gold swimming through the murky waters of a lake. This was the house of Jacoby and Delaney Summers, 14 year old twins that, if they knew how much their life would change that day, would have been more conscious to lock the door, and to get out of that house. As soon as possible.



* - Writting Name


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Post by Taylor_Potter 8/29/2009, 3:40 pm

Yeah!! Great job buddeh! So far so great
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/29/2009, 3:56 pm

I like it so far! Very Happy *jumps up and down eagerly*
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Post by Noah the Flood 8/29/2009, 3:57 pm

Thanks guys! My Language teacher filled my head with stuff about similies, ironey, flashbacks, ottomattapeia (I SPELT THAT WRONG) and stuff, so..yeah you'll be seeing alot of writting from me xD
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Post by Taylor_Potter 8/29/2009, 4:02 pm

Yeah!! Wait... what's o-word?
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/29/2009, 5:23 pm

Nice. x3

I think it's onomatopeia? Wait, no, that's the wrong spelling too . . . *checks* Aha! Onomatopoeia!
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Post by Noah the Flood 8/29/2009, 5:30 pm

YES! What she said xD

I'm thinking about what you posted about first printing rights or whatever Shad...I might just post the first two chapters or something...
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/29/2009, 5:32 pm

Aww. xD Well, I'll understand if you do!
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Post by Nightowl 8/29/2009, 5:32 pm

Sounds pretty cool, Snakey. Smile I like it.
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Post by Lyssa45 9/2/2009, 9:55 am

Awesome start so far! I love it! Smile
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Post by rattyjol 9/18/2009, 2:29 am

Awesome! Smile More?
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Post by The Mad Hatter 9/18/2009, 5:33 pm

Cool!
Wheeereeee did you get the name Delaney from? XDD
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Post by catbuster 9/19/2009, 4:51 pm

sounds cool so far I can't wait for the rest pm me when theres more!
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