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Post by DreamCatcher81 9/7/2009, 5:29 pm

Fantasy: Nothing
Maturity: Um. . . Putting your reflection down??? xD

Reflections

Gliding through the hallways,
Passing all those pretty faces.
Sliding by the dreaded reflective windows,
To see the girl looking back.
She’s got too big of a nose,
And her teeth are crooked despite the ugly braces.
Her hair isn’t curly, it’s straight.
And her eyebrows are too bushy.
Turn away quickly,
She’s not pretty enough to look at.
Gaze lingering on blondie,
With perfect ringlets of hair,
And shimmery blue eyes.
She’s eager to pass the windows,
To see her beauty.
Don’t turn back,
Don’t look at the windows.
They only show an ugly girl.
They only show
Reflections.


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Verse 1

Gliding through the hallways,

Passing all those pretty faces.

Sliding by the dreaded reflective windows,

And seeing the girl looking back.



Chorus

She’s got too big of a nose,

And her teeth are crooked despite the ugly braces.

Her hair isn’t curly, it’s straight.

And her eyebrows are too bushy.

Turn away quickly,

She’s not pretty enough to look at.



Verse 2

Gaze lingering on blondie

With perfect ringlets of hair,

And shimmery blue eyes.

She’s eager to pass the windows and see her beauty.



Bridge

Don’t turn back,

Don’t look at the windows.

They only show an ugly girl.

They only show

Reflections.



Chorus



Bridge Repeat


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Post by PugsRock 9/7/2009, 5:48 pm

She’s got too big of a nose,
And her teeth are crooked despite the ugly braces.
Her hair isn’t curly, it’s straight.
And her eyebrows are too bushy

Aw, that's me.

But nice poem, though. Smile
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Post by DreamCatcher81 9/7/2009, 6:06 pm

Haha thanks. Yeah, same. That's why I chose those things! Except I got my braces off. . . But whatevs! xD
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Post by PugsRock 9/7/2009, 6:07 pm

xD Except I have curly hair (and hate it). xD
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Post by Komoda 9/7/2009, 8:07 pm

You don't have bushy eyebrows, Dream. XP

I love this poem! I can really relate to it.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 9/7/2009, 8:55 pm

Haha thanks. . . . But how would you even know??? I get them waxed though. tongue Wow that sounds really wierd. xD
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Post by Nightowl 9/7/2009, 11:25 pm

I like your poem Dream. Smile Great job! Very Happy
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Post by Tolly12bells 9/9/2009, 10:50 pm

I like this a lot. I can definitely relate to it a little bit. nod
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Post by rattyjol 9/9/2009, 11:07 pm

That's a good poem. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/10/2009, 6:27 am

Nice job . . . bleah, that's me, too! xD Except I don't have braces yet. And I think I'm pretty anyway - power of a positive perspective and all that crap. nod
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Post by DreamCatcher81 10/20/2009, 10:51 am

Haha thanks guys! Go Shadow!
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Post by littletoes101 10/20/2009, 4:27 pm

beautiful!
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Post by DreamCatcher81 10/25/2009, 6:29 pm

Thanks Little!
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Post by DreamCatcher81 11/28/2009, 6:29 pm

Added a song version. cheesy
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/29/2009, 9:14 am

That's cool! :3
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Post by DreamCatcher81 12/1/2009, 12:17 am

Thanks! I think I'm gonna record this song too. . . . Not for sure, but I hope so. I have to figure out a decent chorus chords first!
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