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The Cost of War--Short poem by Sweety.

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Post by sweetcreola 9/11/2009, 3:24 pm

Maturity: Reference to death, and guns.
Fantasy: No.
This is dedicated to those who gave their lives for their countries.

We march to war with our
Guns to our chests
Shot and fallen we are laid to rest
Underneath the windswept willow
With our helmets for our pillow.

I know it is really short, but I find it softly touching.

Please comment and tell me what you think!
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Post by Lyssa45 9/11/2009, 7:48 pm

It is very touching; but hey, quality, not quantity. RIP all those who lost their lives on this day in 2001.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/12/2009, 9:50 am

It is touching. Very Happy I really like it!
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Post by Arianna 9/12/2009, 10:04 am

That's really good. It's short, yet touching. Like Lissy said, quality not quantity worked perfectly here.
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Post by Boballoo123 9/12/2009, 12:29 pm

This is really good Sweety! It is very touching.
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Post by rattyjol 9/13/2009, 3:02 am

Short'n'sweet. Smile Good job.
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Post by sweetcreola 9/13/2009, 9:01 am

Thanks everyone! ^^
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