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Post by shadowsowner888 9/13/2009, 10:12 am

Maturity: Low
Fantasy: None


This was written about my mom - but now it seems like it's for her. Because she said some time after I wrote it that she was done. And she means it.

Nothing in this world can save me
From the darkest depths of “heck.”
I’ve been driven into madness
And now I’m just an empty shell.

No one cares about my fate,
There’s no one left to be aware.
That’s all I need, I need someone,
A person that will care.

CHORUS
Hearts are broken, time again,
Left to rot under the sun.
Everything will go all wrong,
I’m done. I’m done. I’m done.
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Post by Arianna 9/13/2009, 10:23 am

I'm so sorry, Shadow. But it's a great poem.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/13/2009, 10:47 am

That's okay. Smile Thanks.
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Post by Arianna 9/13/2009, 10:48 am

You're welcome Smile It's really good, though. Have you got a tune?
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/13/2009, 11:07 am

Thanks! ^^ Not quite, but I'm working on it.
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 2:30 am

Great song/poem thingy. Sad, though.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/28/2009, 10:39 am

Thanks! And yah, it is. xP Most of my songs are sad . . .
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