Take my heart
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Take my heart
by Avé 9/16/2009, 9:41 pm
Yes, it's short. 
No, I don't really care.
Enjoy!
No, I don't really care.
Enjoy!
Just one more thing
Before you leave
Take my heart,
it's yours to keep
It's been beat and crushed
Fix it up
Because the only one who can mend
My heart is you
There are two things
For you to know
First, I love you
I don't want you to go
And that you are
the only one I trust
Because the only I will give
My heart to is you
Before you leave
Take my heart,
it's yours to keep
It's been beat and crushed
Fix it up
Because the only one who can mend
My heart is you
There are two things
For you to know
First, I love you
I don't want you to go
And that you are
the only one I trust
Because the only I will give
My heart to is you
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Re: Take my heart
by Pokadottie 9/19/2009, 10:38 am
Aww, that's a really great poem! Nice job, short and sweet, I like it!
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Re: Take my heart
by Nightowl 9/21/2009, 1:17 pm
'Tis very sweet, like everyone else said. 
I like it.
I like it.
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