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Post by Horsey 9/28/2009, 10:58 am

The first time I ever recall seeing Adrian, was when I was five. Her silvery figure defiantly stood out in a crowd of bubbling kindergarders. There isn't much for me to describe about her appearence; she just seems to shimmer a beautiful shade of silver. Her hair was about shoulder length, and very wavy. She had a nice, clean face and rather frail build. I still wonder if when she was alive, if she had a single bone in her body.

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Adrian got quite frustrated when the teachers and kids walked right past her [or through]. I could tell because she would ball her fists, scrunch up her face, and vaporize into another corner in room A27. I was, however, unaware of my gift at that time. It didn't matter what she looked like, or how people just seemed pretend she wasn't there. My Mom said that everyone was special in there own way...Adrian must have been very special.

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Watcha guys think so far? I came up with this idea last night...and that's all the further I got. The story's basically just about a girl who grows up having a ghost as her best friend [Adrian]. xD. Comments/critz are greatly appreciated!
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 1:42 pm

Looks awesome so far. Smile
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Post by Arianna 9/28/2009, 1:45 pm

It looks really awesome! I love the idea of the ghost as a best friend Very Happy
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Post by PugsRock 9/28/2009, 4:15 pm

Nice! Smile It's an interesting idea.
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Post by Nightowl 9/28/2009, 8:38 pm

Cool idea Apple! It's a good plot. Very Happy
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Post by Reader 9/28/2009, 9:04 pm

Very nice! I like it a lot.
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 9/28/2009, 9:11 pm

Sounds interesting! Very Happy
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Post by Horsey 9/28/2009, 9:24 pm

Thanks all! Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/29/2009, 3:55 pm

Cool job so far! x3 That's a really original idea.
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Post by Horsey 9/29/2009, 10:13 pm

I know...I am really excited about this one. =]

-runs off to write more-
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Post by Nightowl 9/29/2009, 11:05 pm

Can't wait, Apple! Very Happy
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Post by Horsey 9/30/2009, 7:30 am

Hm.....I actually changed some of the ideas on my story. Some of my new writing just doesn't sound right when I write in the past tense...plus instead of just having Adrian as a friend, Aubrey's gonna go to a paranormal school where she learns to control her powers and stuff. xD
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Post by catbuster 10/25/2009, 10:35 am

It sounds good so far!
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