Watching

Maturity: Nothing
Fantasy: Someone watching people

This is really bad, I know. I should add punctuation, but I'm too lazy.

I stare through the glass
At the people below
They walk down the sidewalk,
Talk with their friends
Listen to music
Completely naïve
In their idealistic worlds
They can't see me
But I can see them

Their lives are ordinary
Boring, to say the least
Yet they act
As if they were...
Fun?
I stare at the kids
The old and the young
They can't see me
But I can see them

The lovers on the sidewalk
Aren't all alone
There are people around them
They aren't at home
But yet they act as if
No soul can see them
They can't see me
But I can see them

I sit in my watch-tower
I count the days
I'm no more than a statue
An eternal haze
And so no one knows
How I'm really here
In my invisibility
They can't see me
But I can see them

This is really good! It's so true.

I like it... Really makes me think...

Thanks

It seems like a simple little poem, but it's, like, not. It has kinda a message hidden in it, ya know? Really good, even without punctuation. I like it.

Thanks, Shad. I should probably go back and edit punctuation, but.. xP

Woah.
I just realized what most people are thinking of my poem and I'm like 'Wow.' 'Cause I really wrote it because I was looking out my window. xD

That's even cooler, then, cus you spontaneously wrote a poem with an accidental message.

Yes. And it makes me question what I was thinking.

That's awesome.

It's so cool that you accidentally put a message in your poem!

Whatever that message may be. :/
It doesn't correlate with my beliefs. xD

Maybe the message wasn't even from you then!!!!

Okay, I'mma stop before I make you uncomfortable. xD

Yes, good idea, Shad. xD