My Identity
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My Identity
by Cyn431 11/17/2009, 9:32 pm
If you can't tell, I got a little bored. So I wrote another poem. 
Who am I?
Who am I to you?
Am I a poster,
Showing the world what I offer?
Am I a boaster,
Shoving my offer in the face of the world?
Am I a stupid donkey,
Who will never, ever bend?
Am I your lucky key,
Who will stick with you to the end?
Am I your friend?
Who am I to you?
Am I a star,
Shining with a heart just as bright?
Am I bizarre,
Who made some freaky wrong turn somewhere?
Am I a conflict,
Only making your problems list gone wild?
Am I perfect,
Lightening up your every smile?
Am I your child?
Who am I to you?
Am I orange,
Too strange, weird, and different for you?
Am I violet,
Just unique enough to please you?
Am I black,
With a dark, empty core?
Am I a rainbow,
With a vibrant, beautiful core?
Love, am I yours?
Who am I to me?
Am I me?
Who am I to you?
Am I a poster,
Showing the world what I offer?
Am I a boaster,
Shoving my offer in the face of the world?
Am I a stupid donkey,
Who will never, ever bend?
Am I your lucky key,
Who will stick with you to the end?
Am I your friend?
Who am I to you?
Am I a star,
Shining with a heart just as bright?
Am I bizarre,
Who made some freaky wrong turn somewhere?
Am I a conflict,
Only making your problems list gone wild?
Am I perfect,
Lightening up your every smile?
Am I your child?
Who am I to you?
Am I orange,
Too strange, weird, and different for you?
Am I violet,
Just unique enough to please you?
Am I black,
With a dark, empty core?
Am I a rainbow,
With a vibrant, beautiful core?
Love, am I yours?
Who am I to me?
Am I me?
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Re: My Identity
by LuckyPenny666 11/17/2009, 9:56 pm
Great poem! 
I especially like the last line, and the poem's format is neat.
I especially like the last line, and the poem's format is neat.
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Re: My Identity
by shadowsowner888 11/18/2009, 7:01 pm
That's a very thought-provoking piece. Nice job! I like the ending bit, especially. :3
Nice job! I like the ending bit, especially. :3
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Re: My Identity
by Komoda 11/18/2009, 7:38 pm
Ooh, I really like this one! ^^ Awesome job! I love the way you worded it and I can relate to it too, 'cause I kinda wonder what people think of me.
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Re: My Identity
by Cyn431 11/18/2009, 9:45 pm
Thanks!Great poem!
Yeah, that's probably my favorite part, too--the last line, I mean.Thanks,That's a very thought-provoking piece.Nice job! I like the ending bit, especially. :3
Thanksies!Ooh, I really like this one! ^^ Awesome job! I love the way you worded
it and I can relate to it too, 'cause I kinda wonder what people think
of me.
I agree, sometimes you just wonder....
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Re: My Identity
by DiscardedHarmony 11/19/2009, 1:49 am
Woah, that is awesome! I think almost everybody can relate to this; great poem!
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