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Post by almightykey 12/7/2009, 1:58 pm

fantasy: yes




A hairy beast emerged from the trees. His snarls and growls loud info to shake the ground. The green and purple fur that covered his enormous body swayed in the wind. Katie’s eyes grow in fright as the little hobbit named beenie pulled at her arm. “ we must go now.” beny yelled over the noise of the monster. Katie followed her feet tripping over every stick and stone, unlike Seth who gracefully leaped from branch to branch. His mind wandered the possibility of escaping. He squinted his eyes thinking hard. Katie managed to trip every five seconds as beny practically carried her through the woods. “keep running” Seth yelled and disappeared to the right. What do we do now beny thought to himself we cant make it with out Seth. The trees were getting thinner as they closed in on the edge of the forest. “ we have no were to go. we’re at the end of the line” Katie yelled “your not” beny added. Katie new what he meant and a sour look crossed her face. “I will not leave u here alone.” Katie refused. They came closer to the edge. Katie’s heart sank as she started to under stand the plan that beny was about to use. “ no” she said “ no what” beny asked “ I will not go home” she yelled. But it was to late, beny had shoved Katie out of the forest edge. She stood looking in at a blank none exciting forest. Her eyes felled with tears. “ Katie” aunt Margie called followed by the very worried voice of her mother. “oh Katie we found you” she wrapped her arms around Katie. “ no” Katie yelled into the empty forest. “ beny Seth” “ who’s beny and Seth” markes asked as he looked down at his older sister all dirty and crying. The sky all of a sudden grow gray and the rain started to pore. “ no” Katie yelled as her mother and aunt pulled her to the house.


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Post by Arianna 12/7/2009, 2:09 pm

Hey, Mandy. Smile
This'll go in the stories section. I'll flag this so a mod can move it there. Smile
Otherwise, it's nice. Smile
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Post by almightykey 12/7/2009, 6:38 pm

ok thanks
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/7/2009, 9:24 pm

Nice job! Smile You've got a lot of details, and the plot is exciting so far.
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Post by almightykey 12/7/2009, 9:44 pm

thanks i wrote this like two or three years ago and just found it on my computer lol
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/7/2009, 10:53 pm

Oh, okay, lol! Smile
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Post by catbuster 12/7/2009, 10:59 pm

Yay, I like it Manda! I told you on your other one but just incase, don't forget the fantasy and maturity ratings!!
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Post by almightykey 12/7/2009, 11:15 pm

thanks m Xb
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