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Danielle's Titleless Story

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Post by twilighter3000 12/20/2009, 2:16 pm


Maturity: Undescriptive violence
Fantasy: Magical creatures


The girl whipped around as she heard a twig snap behind her, her face going as white as the snow swirling around her. She saw the thing coming out from the trees, and stumbled back, a bloodcurdling scream tearing out of her mouth.
I woke up; my hair matted down and sweat rolling down my face. I blinked and was surprised to feel tears squeeze out to join the sweat sticky on my cheeks. It’s just a dream, just a dream, I told myself, as I took deep, calming breaths. But even as I told myself that it wasn’t real, I felt deep in my stomach that, somewhere, a girl with hair as black as a raven, had just died a horrible death.
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Going to school that morning was agonizing. All I could think about was the strange girl with jet black hair. In American History I sketched pictures of her. In English I wrote a long back story of her family that came out of nowhere. But the strangest thing happened at exactly 1:43, during my gym period.
I had to force myself to concentrate for that one hour, as we were playing basketball. Daydream for one second and the next you’d be in the nurse’s office with a bloody nose. Swish! I watched our school’s boy basketball team captain sink another shot as I stood there, basically useless.
“That’s right, 14 points!” Alex said, putting his hands up like he was daring anyone to contradict. I rolled my eyes, his ego was bigger than his point average per game. Alex dribbled up the makeshift court again, single-handedly getting through the other team’s defense, sinking another lay-up. I sighed, glancing at the clock to see how much time we had left, and the clocked ticked past another minute to 1:43. I felt myself sink to my knees and the world around me disappeared, showing one entirely different.
A boy around my age was sitting on a stony floor of a cave, huddled near the fire. He shivered, his breath coming out in white clouds, and poked the fire with the stick laying next to it. “We n-need you Kat-t-talina,” He whispered between his chattering teeth, “we need you n-now.”
Flashing white, the vision disappeared and I looked up to see my team peering anxiously down at me. I was suddenly aware of an awful smell and looked back down to see the gym teacher waving strong smelling liquid under my nose. I winced at the smell and pulled away, standing up slowly.

Finally wrote some more--Hope you like! Smile


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Post by Tolly12bells 12/20/2009, 4:13 pm

Ooh, YES. Please continue it! It sounds so awesome!
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Post by rattyjol 12/20/2009, 4:27 pm

Ooh... Very Happy More.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 12/20/2009, 5:03 pm

Yes Danielle's Titleless Story 899677 You should continue Danielle's Titleless Story 899677 I would have no problem with that, whatsoever Danielle's Titleless Story 818473
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Post by twilighter3000 12/20/2009, 5:48 pm

Thanks! I'll write more when I can! Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/21/2009, 10:02 am

Oooh. x3 Sweeeeet! Definitely keep working on this one, Dani.
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Post by twilighter3000 12/21/2009, 5:48 pm

Thanks, I hope I will Shadz! Very Happy
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Post by Doodles 12/27/2009, 2:15 am

Oh my gosh, what's going to happen next? You can't just stop right there! But so far I totally love it! You HAVE to contiue!!!
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Post by twilighter3000 12/29/2009, 12:53 pm

lol, sorry! Thanks, I write a little more last night, I'll try to post more later! Smile
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Post by twilighter3000 2/6/2010, 5:57 pm

Finally wrote some more! Sorry it's not much, I have to go practice guitar now!
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Post by rattyjol 2/6/2010, 6:01 pm

o.0

MORE.

Is Katalina the MC's name or is it someone else?
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/7/2010, 9:29 am

I agree with Ratty! Surprised
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Post by twilighter3000 2/7/2010, 10:57 am

It's the main character's name, which I'll get around to putting in the story soon, lol.
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