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Post by Jade 1/10/2010, 10:37 pm

Continue ^-^

I closed Brooke's temp thread because only mods are allowed to make them Smile Thanks, in the future if you want one PM one of the mods that's online.
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 1/10/2010, 10:38 pm

I smiled at him. "I'd rather walk."
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/10/2010, 10:41 pm

[Jess did you ever reply?]
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 1/10/2010, 10:43 pm

(sorry)

"Well, that's good. Maybe my cousin will let you stay."
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 10:47 pm

"Okay," I smiled simply, starting to walk towards the forest with her again. "I'm sorry about what I said to you," I confessed, " about everything, really. Honestly, i'm really sorry and I can't stop thinking about it." "I have a relapsing memory so I REALLY cannot stop thinking about it," I explained to her. "And honestly I didn't think I'd see you Again. I got kind of depressed but Rosie nutured me back to normal, that's why we've been living together. Because i kind of owe her. And just as I was leaving she told me she liked me and now I have np clue what to do because I- I never stopped liking you," I blurted to her, staring down at her, but then glancing awayy. "wow I'm an IDIOT," I thought to myself.
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 10:48 pm

"Okay," I smiled simply, starting to walk towards the forest with her again. "I'm sorry about what I said to you," I confessed, " about everything, really. Honestly, i'm really sorry and I can't stop thinking about it." "I have a relapsing memory so I REALLY cannot stop thinking about it," I explained to her. "And honestly I didn't think I'd see you Again. I got kind of depressed but Rosie nutured me back to normal, that's why we've been living together. Because i kind of owe her. And just as I was leaving she told me she liked me and now I have np clue what to do because I- I never stopped liking you," I blurted to her, staring down at her, but then glancing awayy. "wow I'm an IDIOT," I thought to myself.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/10/2010, 10:48 pm

[Its okay don't worry about it.]

''Hmmm so you want me to stay?''Chad said with a smirk.
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 10:49 pm

(reply, one tree hill?)
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/10/2010, 10:49 pm

[Uh I did:)]
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Post by Aj 1/10/2010, 10:50 pm

((Lisa, did you see my reply to Celia or should I type it again?))
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 1/10/2010, 10:50 pm

"Woah, woah. Jake, calm down." I smiled at him. "It'll be fine. Just relax. And of course I forgive you." I'm gonna give Rosie a peice of my mind when we get back. was all I could think.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/10/2010, 10:51 pm

[Hearts.Lol]


[Uh okay she tells him the story I wrote yesterday lol I don't feel like re writing that took a long time lol]

......''And thats what happened.....''Heather finished.
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Post by Aj 1/10/2010, 10:58 pm

It was a bit awkward standing alone on the shore of this waterfall, but then again there was no one there to see me. I blinked a couple times, just to make sure I wasn't have a dream or anything, then looked forward again to see a girl around my age doing a cartwheel on the rich green grass that covered the land. Whichever land this was. "Hello?" I walked a couple steps to the girl, "Do you speak english?" I asked, feeling a bit silly, but I wasn't sure what else I was suppose to say.

((Reply, Lisa?))
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 11:03 pm

"thanks," I half-smiled at her. "And whose freaking out?" I chucked, as we entered the forest. I opened the small Door for her as I heard a muffled growl not far off. "One second," I excused myself, walking a few feet into the forest. I went to where the growl was heard, but nothing was there. Sighing, I walked back to Jessi, opening my mouth to speak, when I saw one quick flash behind me. I pulled the dagger out of my undershirt in a second, slightly cutting along the skin under my ribs in the process, just as the thing jumped out on us. I was expecting a wolf, but instead a towering grizzle bear struck out at my arm, the force sending me back again the wall of the valley. "Crap," I muttered underneath my breath, grabbing a hold of Jessis arm and teleporting us into the hidden part of the valley, protected from the bear.
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 1/10/2010, 11:05 pm

(brb. g2g take a shower. xP)
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 11:07 pm

"Sorry," I apologised, for all the crap I've been saying to you." I sighed, wondering what that must have been like.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/10/2010, 11:09 pm

Heather looked at him...''No don't be.''She told him.''I should be sorry for beiong so stubborn.''She said with a smirk trying to change the subject about what had happened to her.
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 11:19 pm

I chuckled. "I guess it's my turn, huh?" I asked her. "My parents were both like those crazy soccer moms who yell and scream and run across the field," I explained to her. "And they influenced me to be better than my brother, so to me that was how I got love from them, by trying to be better than my brother. So, over time I grew an obsession and seriously considered killing him... I had it all planned out, he was walking back from his girlfriends house and I put that spray stuff over my lisense plate so that it can't have pictures taken of it, then I hit him with it. He went into a comma for four months and during this time I comforted his fiancé and eventually had an affair with her. I planned it all out so that he'd walk in on us a week after he got back from the hospital and then took the time to confront him that his credit had been permenantely ruined because I had stolen his card and boughten two cars with it a while back," I explained to her. "Im not a nice guy, like I told you."
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/10/2010, 11:23 pm

Hearts wrote:I chuckled. "I guess it's my turn, huh?" I asked her. "My parents were both like those crazy soccer moms who yell and scream and run across the field," I explained to her. "And they influenced me to be better than my brother, so to me that was how I got love from them, by trying to be better than my brother. So, over time I grew an obsession and seriously considered killing him... I had it all planned out, he was walking back from his girlfriends house and I put that spray stuff over my lisense plate so that it can't have pictures taken of it, then I hit him with it. He went into a comma for four months and during this time I comforted his fiancé and eventually had an affair with her. I planned it all out so that he'd walk in on us a week after he got back from the hospital and then took the time to confront him that his credit had been permenantely ruined because I had stolen his card and boughten two cars with it a while back," I explained to her. "Im not a nice guy, like I told you."

''Uh I am sorry that has happened to you.''Heather said looking at him.''But I mean you seem nice to me and I think thats all that matters is your nice to me.'' Heather said with a slight smile.
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 1/10/2010, 11:29 pm

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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 1/10/2010, 11:31 pm

"Are you okay?!" I asked Jake as we teleported. My arm was around my waist. The bear had scratched me and then bit my arm. My hand was covered in blood. I tried to keep preesure on it.
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 11:34 pm

"Okay," I chuckled, not sure what to talk about. "where are you going to sleep tonight," I asked her, not sure if she had a home or not
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/10/2010, 11:36 pm

''Uh I am not sure I just fell down the water fall today so I don't have anything planned out.''She told him.
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 11:40 pm

"Yeah, just fine," I lied, running over to her. "But are you okay?" I asked her, looking around. "I-I'll be right back," I said, teleporting to my house, getting some gauze and bandages, then coming back. "Here," I said, pressing a cool clothe against her hand, since that's where the worst wound was. "I'm so sorry,"I apolgized, putting a gauze bandage against it and wrapping the clothe bandage around it a few times before cutting it off. I looked down to see a blood stained shirt, but ignored it, knowing I cod stitch it up later.
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 11:42 pm

"I have an extra room that you could stay in, or I could see if you could stay with my cousin," I offered, yawning. (g2g bye)
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