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Post by Jinx 5/22/2010, 6:49 am

"Whatever" It said, disappointed."You gonna do anything interesting? I am reallllly bored- And that's a very bad thing for you."
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Post by iGrievous 5/23/2010, 12:16 am

"I might have an extra slice around here somewhere..." Tyson muttered, feeling his pockets for stuff.
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Post by Jinx 5/23/2010, 7:41 am

The voice made a very odd noise, a mix of sheer boredom noise and annoyance noise.
"I do not know what she sees in you," It mumbled, then said in a much crazier sounding voice "First test!"

And at that, the world melted away into an image in his head, a daydream. The room was white, his clothes where white and he was, for some reason, holding a gun.
After a few seconds for admiring of the small pistol in hand, Mea was escorted into the room by two people who looked like guards, judging by the uniform. Her arms and legs where cuffed to a pole in the center of the room.She said nothing to him, merely glared for a few seconds than shut her eyes, letting her head hang awkwardly.
Then a polite, even, British voice behind him said-

"There are two answers to test number 1. Shoot the prisoner, and go back to your holding cell for more testing, or don't shoot the prisoner and be punished before going back to your holding cell for more testing. Thank you for your time." A microphone clicked off, the guards left and he was left in a room with Mea (The Prisoner) and a gun.
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Post by iGrievous 5/24/2010, 10:24 am

Tyson pondered for a moment, examining the gun he'd just now picked up. He removed the clip, and poured the bullets out. "... Five, six, seven..." He counted. Then he put the bullets back, returned the clip, and looked one after another to the guards, and Mea. "One... Two... BANG!! BANG-BANG!!" The noise echoed loudly off the walls as Tyson admired the smoking holes in both guards', and Mea's foreheads.
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Post by Jinx 5/24/2010, 3:13 pm

"Wrong answer" smiled the voice. A nasty electrical shock wreaked it's havoc through his brain, heart and pretty much all of his important organs.

"Back to your holding cell, 4b." The polite voice said, releasing him from the dream in his painful state.
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Post by iGrievous 5/25/2010, 1:04 pm

"IT...WAS...WORTH...IT!" Tyson told himself through the torture. "And where would that be?" He panted to the voice afterwards.
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Post by Jinx 5/25/2010, 1:08 pm

"A prison built for your consciousness for when the mistress kills your mortal self, Demon child."
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Post by iGrievous 5/27/2010, 9:41 am

"Yeah, but where???" He asked. "I don't know which way, and I killed the guards."
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Post by Jinx 5/27/2010, 3:11 pm

It sighed "In the mistresses mind, foolish boy"
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Post by iGrievous 5/29/2010, 5:27 pm

"Too late, sucker, I'm outta here!" He called, walking through a wall he'd realized had a smaller molecular density than the others.
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Post by Jinx 5/29/2010, 10:05 pm

And then he fell.

He fell into a deep, primal darkness that the world had never seen since fire was found.
"Baka" whispered the thing that caught him. "This is the shadow world. I'd stay in your box." As it let out a soft breath the box-like room formed around them once again.
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Post by iGrievous 6/1/2010, 11:58 pm

Tyson was inclined to mutter an insanity, but decided against it. "How about this?" He screamed, as he blew down the walls around him, to find himself in the real world again. Or was it?
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Post by Jinx 6/2/2010, 6:41 am

Mea let out a sound of surprise as the second consciousness breached into her mind again.

The 'Real world' shifted and blurred and he found himself outside in a pond about six inches deep. Except the pond extended in all directions, all the way out the horizon. It appeared he was in some sort of valley surrounded by huge trees who's waxy leaves glowed in the light of the two moons above.

One of these strange moons was larger than earth's moon, and reddish. The other was the same size but depending on what angle you looked at it, the pale whitish moon would glow purple and blue and green. Their was apparently no civilization here. Tyson was completely alone.


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Post by iGrievous 6/2/2010, 11:07 pm

"Ah, alone at last...." Tyson murmered to an imaginary figure who's shoulders he had his arms around.
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Post by Jinx 6/3/2010, 6:25 am

And then a completely, eerily white figure broke the surface of the water. looking around him for a second, enjoying the view before moving forward as more of the pale people swam up into the moonlight.

As this one figure moved forward, you tell that he was male, with chalk white skin, yellow-white hair, and some sort of short green-white skirt for clothing. A blue crystal dagger was tied to his arm with a strip of the cloth.
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Post by iGrievous 6/4/2010, 6:42 pm

"Hello, mate!" Tyson called, waving. "I'm sorry, am I intruding somthing?"
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Post by Jinx 6/5/2010, 7:14 am

He looked at him with surprise, yellow eyes widening, than narrowing to slits.
"Demon." came the low growl, and the dagger was thrown, pinning him to the rock.
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Post by iGrievous 6/5/2010, 10:16 am

"Ouch, you know it isn't nice to call names." Tyson said. "But I would like to call you the same!" He called through grunts as he tried to pull the dagger out.
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Post by Jinx 6/5/2010, 10:56 am

"First!" The random dude shouted, looking around frantically for whoever this first was.
"Essai" Growled the girl that emerged from the growing crowd.
"You do not leave the pack! Sit!"

"I found one, a demon.." He mumbled, looking surprised at her reply
"I noticed. Now, Sit!"
He sat, both bewildered and angry
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Post by iGrievous 6/6/2010, 9:32 am

Tyson wrenched the dagger free, and hurled it over the sea.
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Post by Jinx 6/6/2010, 9:46 am

Mea snickered, and patted Essai on the head.
"That. Was. A. Terrible. Throw. Look how easy he pulled it out!" She sent another three daggers to hold him-Specifically, small, thin, shuriken type daggers.
"So anyway. You. What are you doing in Aurae land? Your kind is typically not so daring."
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Post by iGrievous 6/11/2010, 10:29 am

"Me, or you?" Tyson asked, wincing as he struggled with the daggers. "You put me here, remember? By the way, when do I get to leave this mind game and go home?" He asked.
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Post by Jinx 6/11/2010, 11:32 am

"What do y-" Suddenly the world went black, all except for her, and her glowing silver eyes.
"You'll only get answers if you ask the the right questions. And the right questions will bring you to the final answer."
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Post by iGrievous 6/13/2010, 9:20 pm

"Am I being duped?" He wondered aloud. "Is this some kind of game show or what?"
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Post by Jinx 6/13/2010, 10:01 pm

"Nope!" She said cheerfully, the sudden grin on her face crinkling the corners of her eyes.
"You got any other interesting questions?"
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