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Sweet Girl, Sweet Melody

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Post by PriestessYuki 1/22/2010, 11:33 pm

Feelings of a friend that I put into poetry for him.

Sweet Girl, Sweet Melody

The Sweet smell of Lavender
Traces the Air with the Scent
My nose follows with admiration
To the Source of this sweetness

Weakened by the Caress
As a hand gliding up my arm
Whispering to me word of endearment
Strengthened for the search of Her

Bright light of her Soul
Lighting the way home
Finding my way to True love
Running to that shining beam

In content I follow
Wondering if she'll be there
That one place I know to find her
In our Cabin in the woods, waiting

And I see her in Her glory
Sitting at the squeaky swing
Her white dress, against soft skin
Flows around her in such Grace

This is the Source of my Heart
Where it will always follow
Treading back from the dark, my
Heart embraced in her Shadow light

Eyes of Icy Sapphires
She looks up at me
Her smile kind as she
Is wasted upon me

Sweetness Smell
Watering my mouth
The Breeze spreading it
Like a gentle wildfire

Sweet Girl, Sweet melody
I call out her name
Will you dance with me?
Forever? Under the bright night?

And in that Sweet voice
She sings those words
Always with purity
"Forever my Dearest"

Oh sweet Girl
How you make me feel
That Love that you've shown
So true, and right

Then it fades away
That Sweet smell, your light
I gasp and open my eyes
To an empty bed

All just a Dream
Never to become reality
And I should have,
Should have cried asleep

I find myself smiling
Awaiting for another night
Where I can meet you again
My Sweet Girl, Sweet Melody

I will always wait for you.

Part 2

Twirling under the stars
Breathing in a deep breath
My noise searching for the scent
Hoping to catch a whiff

Running as fast as I can
Through the woods
While the night starts to settle in
Cloaking the deepest shadows

Desperate as I search for her
Howling in frustration
The gentle wind blows through
And for once I despise it's caress

A figure of a shadow appears
Taking shape of Her
My tail stands on it's end
When I look into the eyes of Night

A step close and another
Clenching my teeth
Was this another dream?
A constant game She will play

Head thrown back
Arms spread wide
Staring up at Luna
She whispers softly

"Courez librement"
The Night is always ours, run freely

My eyes wide open
Turning my head
Sighing deeply
Fading slowly away

The circle starts to break
Energy slowly weakening
Shallow breathing claws my lungs
Power unreceived, but....

Time will always be on my side
Where my dreams become reality
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/23/2010, 10:04 am

Awesome job. :3 The first one is so sweet, and the second one is so beautiful.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 1/23/2010, 10:02 pm

That gave me goosebumps... the first part, like Shadow said, is so sad, like he's searching for her, but will never find her... Sad The second part is elegant, almost holding back a lot of the emotion that was in the first part. But it gives hope. ^^
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