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Post by Jenna 1/23/2010, 6:58 pm

Hi people:)
I am in a super hard writing class......and have to have a 450 word S.A. rough draft done by Tuesday.
The S.A. thing is comparing 2 poems below i will write the (there super short) and if you see anything i could write about send me a PM or reply please:D BTW I am at 300 word so i need 150 more.
Ok here are the poems,

poem 1:

"The Pasture by Jack Frost"
"I'm going out to clean the pasture spring:
I'll only stop to rake the leaves away
(And wait to watch the water clear, I may):
I shan't be long.-You come too.

I'm going out to fetch the little calf
That's standing by the mother. It's so young
it totters when she licks it with her tongue.
I shan't be long.-You come too.

poem 2:

"Buffalo Dusk by Carl Sandburg"
The buffaloes are gone.
And those who saw the buffaloes.
Those who saw the buffaloes by thousands and how they pawed
their great heads down pawing on in a great pageant of dusk,
Those who saw the buffaloes are gone.
And the buffaloes are gone.

Ok thank you for reading:)
PLEASE POST A REPLY thanks:)
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Post by Arianna 1/24/2010, 2:49 am

Hmm... Have you compared the locations of the poems? One seems to be less in nature (poem 1) than the other. You could also say something about about how poem one uses and ABBC rhyming pattern, while poem 2 doesn't have one (it's free verse, I guess). Good luck! I'm sure you'll do well. Smile
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Post by Jenna 1/24/2010, 11:32 am

Hahaha i hope but the teacher is SUPER hard!!!!Smile thanks for the tips bye Smile
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Post by Erinbeth 3/23/2010, 12:36 pm

lol I had to mesmirize The Pasture wow I still remember it from last year!! Smile
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