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Dear God,

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Post by Puckspaw 2/12/2010, 5:43 pm

Dear God,
Nothing ever seems alright
Mom and Dad always fight
I'm trying hard to hold on tight
Do you hear my prayer tonight?
Love,
Jenny, age 13

Dear God,
Why does nothing ever change?
Nothing seems to be receding
All the bad still remains
Do you hear my pleading?
Love,
Jenny, age 14

Dear God,
They said it wasn't meant to be
They said it's not my fault
They said they both still love me
Do you hear my call?
Love,
Jenny, age 14 1/2

Dear God,
Things are getting better now
My life has finally sweetened
I may not know the why or how
But, God, I know you listened.
Love,
Jenny, age 15
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Post by Akeria 2/12/2010, 5:54 pm

I love this! It's so original, and so cool!
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/12/2010, 9:11 pm

Wow, that was so amazing! I love it! Very Happy
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Post by CocoaPuff 2/12/2010, 10:46 pm

This is very different from a lot of poems on this site- it kind of tells a story and it's simple yet amazing. Keep writing Wink
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/12/2010, 10:48 pm

That's amazing!
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/13/2010, 11:10 am

Oh my gosh. :3 I love it! I almost started crying, I felt so bad for Jenny.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 2/13/2010, 11:22 am

That's so totally amazing. I love it!
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Post by PugsRock 2/13/2010, 6:24 pm

Good job! Very Happy It's really unique, and I like it!
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Post by LuckyPenny666 2/13/2010, 6:32 pm

Awesome poem! Smile It's very original. I felt so bad for the MC; I could really relate.
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Post by Puckspaw 2/19/2010, 5:00 pm

Thanks everyone! I kind of wrote it for a friend.
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