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Curiosity Killed the Cat

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Post by Komoda 2/13/2010, 10:42 pm

..............Curiosity Killed the Cat..............


"The world's so simple," they say...
...Easily explained in a logical way.


Drip
Drip
Drip

Liquid black garnet
Cascaded through a split cage
No cries left her lips

A malevolent evil lurked near
Shrouding its surroundings with fear

Crackle
Crackle
Crackle


Spurting amber blaze
Brutally tore icy flesh
Not a bone was left

As the scorch sizzled the air
Frightened hearts shattered with despair

Tick
Tock
Tick

Hours passed slowly
Time spent anguished and worried
Heavy secrecy

The feelings of regret weighed her down
After messing with a power so profound

Whoosh
Whoosh
Whoosh

As the breath came back
The brilliant glow returned
The evidence faded

And with the warning in our minds, we watch the sunset fading
Wishing that we didn't know that it was lying there; lurking, waiting

Snicker
Snicker
Snicker

A voice in the wind
So silent moments before
No choice but to hide

Oh, how ignorance is really bliss
The power, the knowledge, was it worth all this?

Meow
Meow
Meow



"The world's so simple," they say...
...Easily explained in a logical way.

......& I'm Not Sure I Want to Know What Brought it Back......
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Post by LuckyPenny666 2/14/2010, 12:06 am

Scary...
You did an amazing job with this poem! I really like the format; it's very creative! Smile
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Post by xSophiexx16 2/14/2010, 2:20 am

Awesome! I love it. <3
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Post by CocoaPuff 2/14/2010, 3:07 am

This is AMAZING! Really Mo, I love it ^^
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Post by Avé 2/14/2010, 5:27 am

This is so amazing, Mo. You're a wonderful poet!
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Post by rattyjol 2/14/2010, 5:28 am

Whoaaa... Awesome. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/14/2010, 9:23 am

Sweeeet. Surprised That layout is stunning. It was totally drawing me in the whole time. Epic job.
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Post by Komoda 2/14/2010, 10:13 am

Wow, thank you all so much for your wonderful comments! Smile
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