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Why? ~ a freeverse poem

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Post by SaddleClub 2/22/2010, 5:12 pm

Hate
Anger
Feelings that are like blows to the heart
Feelings that affect everyone, even people who they aren’t directed to
The possessor of these feelings is like a tormentor
Playing around with other’s emotions endlessly
Not only the person they hate
But people they love
They make friends hide what they truly feel
So why
When the truth comes out
Does the person suddenly become innocent
And the harmless friend become the tormentor?
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/22/2010, 5:16 pm

Very nicely written. Very Happy I love it, it sorta makes you think about how people do that, most of the time, accidentally.
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Post by SaddleClub 2/22/2010, 5:21 pm

Thanks
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/22/2010, 8:34 pm

I agree. Why? xP

Beautiful job, Saddle. Smile If this is based on real life, I'm sorry about whatever happened. :/
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Post by SaddleClub 2/22/2010, 9:09 pm

Thanks Shadow. And it wasn't anything major, it's just sometimes when I tell my friend something and tell her not to judge me or something, she does and then gets all upset and makes me feel like the whole thing is my fault. xP
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/22/2010, 9:28 pm

Aww. Sad *huggle* That's kinda what my mom's like sometimes . . . it really stinks.
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Post by SaddleClub 2/22/2010, 9:45 pm

My friend and I always get past it quickly. But I wrote this while I still felt horrible.
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