The Land Of Fantasya ~ A Fantasy story

by **Malicious Nightmares** 7/6/2009, 7:20 pm

Maturity:Kissing... hand holding.. etc... Rolling Eyes

Fantasy:Gosh! Its a fantasy story!! xD

Chapter 1

"Ashke Hashan Rylian! Come down her, NOW!" Ashke's mom shouted. Ashke zipped her hoodie's zipper and rushed downstairs. "Yeah mom?" she asked, as she wa face-to-face with her mom. "What have you done to my paperwork!?" she shouted, pointing her finger towards ripped up sheets of paper. Some weren't ripped, but had lipstick stains and nail polish and much more. Ashke sighed. "It-- It was..." she thought a moment, then looked around, soon spotting her dog; Blownstar. "It was Blownstar." she laughed, pointing towards the dog. Her mother rolled her eyes, not laughing at all. "Yes, so Blownstar know how to use lipstick, and paint its claws with nail polish??" she exclaimed. Ashke stopped laughing. "Fine, it was me, but.. Blownstar DID rip the pages..." she paused then grabbed her bag and opened the door, slamming it shut as she left for school. Ashke's mom looked down at Blownstar and shook her head. "When will she learn?" she whispered. The dog barked then ran around, chasing its tail. The mother laughed.
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Ashke was panting. She stopped in front of this weird portal like thing, it had never been there. "Where'd that come from...?" she wondered. "I need to investigate." she stepped forward then opened the gate, and entered the portal, dropping her bag in front. She went flying through, then bursted on the other side. "Where am I!?" she exclaimed, as she saw unicorns, cyclops, demons, griffins, necromancers and others of their kinds. A sorceress approached her and starred at her carefuly. She blinked then jumped with joy. "ITS HER! The chosen one!" she exclaimed. Many rushed over to see her. An old man approached her, he looked like a retired sorcerer, who still fended for himself. "Are you Ashke?" he asked her. Ashke gulped, then nodded. "How do you know me?" she asked. "That is of no importance." he replied. "Ashke, listen carefully, you aren't the average human." he told her. Ashke looked confused. "What do you mean?" she asked him curiously. He took a deep breath. "Your a.... sorceress." he announced. He watched as her eyes widened. "I am!?" she exclaimed. He simply nodded.

Want more?? Please comment!

by twilighter3000 7/6/2009, 9:45 pm

Whoa, a lot of stuff happened very quickly! lol! I like it though!

by **DreamCatcher81** 7/6/2009, 9:59 pm

Ya I agree with Twilighter but it's still really good!

by **Malicious Nightmares** 7/7/2009, 9:45 am

Thanks guys! And I beleive I barely made typos for once!xD Normally the stories I write are FILLED with typos. Razz

by **Nightowl** 7/7/2009, 7:50 pm

I like it, but it happens really fast. Smile

You must write more! Very Happy

by **Malicious Nightmares** 7/8/2009, 9:06 pm

Thanks!Will after!

What else will you expect from an 11 year old? Rolling Eyes

by **DreamCatcher81** 7/8/2009, 9:08 pm

Haha. Try typing it on Microsoft Word and then pasting it onto TWG 'cuz Microsoft Word corrects them all while you're typing it. Very Happy

by **shadowsowner888** 7/9/2009, 10:04 am

Awesome job, but I don't think I can really read any more. XD My mom doesn't like the whole idea of sorcery, not to mention that it seriously goes against my religion. (And speaking of which, this is the kind of stuff you should put in "Fantasy:". Smile

Like specifically what is fantasy about this story. So if you could change it to include that stuff, that'd be great.)