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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 3/9/2010, 10:05 pm

Revenge;;

Don't look at me so sad
I can see the piercing lies
They're hidden very bad
Deep beneath your glaring eyes

Revenge; now that is fun
Your punishment will thrive
Your price is not yet done
Just be lucky your alive

You cheated once
You cheated twice
You killed my trust
Now pay the price

I'll push you down
Into the dirt
Our love will drown
Until you hurt

You'll feel what I felt
You'll think what I thought
The pain will be dealt
Revenge will be sought


Just another poem I wrote... Not one of the nicest ones at that xD Honestly it started by me thinking how sad my puppy's eyes looked, then I just wrote about this guy i'm not too happy about... Razz

Maturity - Just about revenge lol. A bit violet I guess?
Fantasy - None.
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/9/2010, 10:13 pm

I like it. ^^ I can definitely relate to that poem! xD
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 3/9/2010, 10:16 pm

Thanks Shadow it means a lot! (:
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Post by leah_hope92 3/10/2010, 7:19 pm

Nice poem. xD
I sorta do need to revenge on this one girl.....
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/11/2010, 7:04 pm

Wonderous poem, Hearts! (=
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 3/11/2010, 7:50 pm

Thank you guys (:
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