Sunset Beach Scenes are So Right, They're Wrong

by **Cyn431** 3/16/2010, 11:24 pm

Maturity: cheating
Fantasy: I'll say none

The title's a take on something Panic! like (yes, they're that much of an influence for me), and I had some color fun. Sunset Beach Scenes are So Right, They're Wrong Icon_razz

Have fun with another five-minute poem! (And this time I mean it when I say five minutes)

Credit goes to Ratty for the color scheme idea.

Find the ocean bed
Settle it, and lay it down
Have it relax from what it knows
And rest in the background

Catch the setting sun
Leave it peeking from its rippling covers
Have her spread her hair out
And create the sky of dusk

Fetch the girl, fetch the boy
Stick their toes into the sand
Wrap their arms around their partner
And make sure they're hand in hand

All so perfect...
Too perfect...

Boyfriend and girlfriend
Future husband and wife
And yet, actor and actress
Sinners in disguise

Lights,
Camera,
ACTION.

by **rattyjol** 3/16/2010, 11:47 pm

Awesome!

I love the last stanza, with the lights, camera, action. cheesy

And the color change thing is awesome too. But maybe you could make the colors look like a sunset! cheesy

by **Cyn431** 3/16/2010, 11:55 pm

Thanks!

I tried doing that with the second stanza--and I think since I have five minutes left with nothing to do I'll go ahead and try to get the blends right. wink

Give me a few.

by **Avé** 3/17/2010, 1:07 am

This is really good, Cyn! Very Happy

I especially love the colors.

by **Cyn431** 3/17/2010, 1:26 pm

Thanks, Ave! Very Happy

... Which are under construction. smug

I was gonna have them up last night until I realized it was almost midnight and my parents would kill me if they found me up at one in the morning staring at a bunch of purples and pinks and oranges. xD I'm still working on it, it's a complicated change.

by **Cyn431** 3/17/2010, 5:47 pm

The colors are finished! Now it's at its final draft.

by **rattyjol** 3/17/2010, 5:54 pm

Ooooh... I love it! Very Happy

by **shadowsowner888** 3/18/2010, 12:21 pm

OMG, that's so pretty. :3

by **Cyn431** 3/24/2010, 10:44 pm

Why, thank you. x]

by Puckspaw 3/25/2010, 5:15 pm

This is great, Cyn! The colors are awesome! nod

by **FOREIGN?!** 3/26/2010, 3:25 pm

Eppppppic! Very Happy

I love how it ended and the colors are like, zomigosh awesome. xD

by **Cyn431** 4/3/2010, 11:42 am

Thanks! (both to Pucks and Forry) Very Happy

by **PugsRock** 4/3/2010, 11:43 am

I love the poem and colors. xD

by **Cyn431** 4/3/2010, 12:27 pm

Why, thank you. xD
It's interesting, both here and my class' Language Arts blog have had ongoing talk on colors... On my class blog it's kind of scary. o.0 xD

by **Novastare** 4/3/2010, 12:40 pm

Wow, love the descriptions of the sunset, very nice!!

by **Cyn431** 4/3/2010, 12:47 pm

Thanks Nova! Very Happy

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