A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
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A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
A homeless man
A teenage girl
An upset boy
All living in this world
What could they
Have in common?
They hate their lives
They're all withdrawn
The homeless man
Living on the street
We know where he is
Everyday he is seen
We don't stop to help
We keep on walking
Moving down the roadside
Into our cell phones we're talking
The teenage girl
Crying in her deskchair
Wishing someone loved her
Wishing someone cared
She finally gets up
She pulls out a knife
She writes on her arm
She wants no more strife
The upset boy
That no one sees
Sitting in the corner
No one hears his pleas
He walks back home
He sees the man
The teenage girl
He begins to plan
He goes to the man
The man with no home
He gives him a meal
The man no longer roams
He goes to the girl
The girl no one loves
He looks at her face
And gives her a hug
The girl felt loved
The man was glad
The boy did all this
Instead of being mad
A teenage girl
An upset boy
All living in this world
What could they
Have in common?
They hate their lives
They're all withdrawn
The homeless man
Living on the street
We know where he is
Everyday he is seen
We don't stop to help
We keep on walking
Moving down the roadside
Into our cell phones we're talking
The teenage girl
Crying in her deskchair
Wishing someone loved her
Wishing someone cared
She finally gets up
She pulls out a knife
She writes on her arm
She wants no more strife
The upset boy
That no one sees
Sitting in the corner
No one hears his pleas
He walks back home
He sees the man
The teenage girl
He begins to plan
He goes to the man
The man with no home
He gives him a meal
The man no longer roams
He goes to the girl
The girl no one loves
He looks at her face
And gives her a hug
The girl felt loved
The man was glad
The boy did all this
Instead of being mad
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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Re: A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
Wow, amazing poem, Lyss! I love how it ended, because i completely thought the boy was going to do something bad and I was like 'nooo!' but then I read it and I was quite happy.
FOREIGN?!- Novel Creator
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Re: A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
I'm not quite sure what to think of this. .-. It's kinda odd and kinda cheering and, yes, well written.
I do think I like it. :3
I do think I like it. :3
Re: A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
Nice poem. But I think I'd be a little weirded if a stranger came up to give me a hug. xD
iGrievous- Well-Known Author
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Age : 27
Re: A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
Awweh. :3 Wonderful job; I'm nearly crying. I wish there were more people in this world like that boy.
Re: A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
Thanks guys!!!
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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Age : 27
Re: A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
Wonderful job. I love it.
swimmergal20+- Short Short Maker
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Re: A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy
Wonderful job!
But I ahree with iGri. I can imagine some dude I don't know, walking up to me, and hugging me. O___o
But I ahree with iGri. I can imagine some dude I don't know, walking up to me, and hugging me. O___o
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