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A Homeless Man, A Teenage Girl And An Upset Boy

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Post by Hahaha818 3/22/2010, 3:43 pm

A homeless man
A teenage girl
An upset boy
All living in this world

What could they
Have in common?
They hate their lives
They're all withdrawn

The homeless man
Living on the street
We know where he is
Everyday he is seen

We don't stop to help
We keep on walking
Moving down the roadside
Into our cell phones we're talking

The teenage girl
Crying in her deskchair
Wishing someone loved her
Wishing someone cared

She finally gets up
She pulls out a knife
She writes on her arm
She wants no more strife

The upset boy
That no one sees
Sitting in the corner
No one hears his pleas

He walks back home
He sees the man
The teenage girl
He begins to plan

He goes to the man
The man with no home
He gives him a meal
The man no longer roams

He goes to the girl
The girl no one loves
He looks at her face
And gives her a hug

The girl felt loved
The man was glad
The boy did all this
Instead of being mad
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/22/2010, 5:02 pm

Wow, amazing poem, Lyss! nod I love how it ended, because i completely thought the boy was going to do something bad and I was like 'nooo!' but then I read it and I was quite happy. Very Happy
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/22/2010, 5:55 pm

I'm not quite sure what to think of this. .-. It's kinda odd and kinda cheering and, yes, well written.
I do think I like it. :3
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Post by iGrievous 3/22/2010, 6:25 pm

Nice poem. Smile But I think I'd be a little weirded if a stranger came up to give me a hug. xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/22/2010, 6:32 pm

Awweh. :3 Wonderful job; I'm nearly crying. I wish there were more people in this world like that boy.
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Post by Hahaha818 3/22/2010, 8:26 pm

Thanks guys!!! Very Happy
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Post by swimmergal20+ 3/23/2010, 9:33 pm

Wonderful job. I love it.Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/23/2010, 9:39 pm

Wonderful job!

But I ahree with iGri. I can imagine some dude I don't know, walking up to me, and hugging me. O___o
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