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The world i've never known

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Post by minimaid 4/16/2010, 6:55 pm

The world i've never known,
So joyous and gleefull,
I want to know,
What it's like to feel whole,
To feel love,
To feel emotion other then hatred,
Someday i'll make it,
Like a pig escaping from the depths of the sluaghter house,
But as of now,
I am that pig,
Someday,
I'll be out.


Woah, I kinda hate that. xD
Tell me if you actually think thats good.
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/16/2010, 11:35 pm

I think it's good! ^^
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Post by minimaid 4/17/2010, 12:00 am

Thanks again.Very Happy
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