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Post by Hahaha818 2/12/2010, 4:51 pm

Don't dwell on the bad things
That happen in life
Be joyful and happy
And ignore all the strife

Be glad all you can
And try to have fun
Let no one put you down
Because you are young

Life's always a gift
We should spend our time
Bringing peace and love
Instead of spreading crime

If there were no conditions
For everyone's love
Could we change the world
With one simple hug?

If everyone listened
To everyone else
Would it change the way
Everyone felt?

I think we can change the world
Starting right now
If we stop what we're doing
And just look around

This world is beautiful
From left to right
All the time
Day or night


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Post by Akeria 2/12/2010, 5:51 pm

That's really well written.
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Post by CocoaPuff 2/12/2010, 10:51 pm

Very nice, I can tell your a happy optimistic person ^-^
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/13/2010, 11:09 am

Sweeeet. :3 You really know what you're saying.
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Post by Hahaha818 2/15/2010, 1:43 pm

Thanks guys!!
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Post by Avé 2/15/2010, 2:15 pm

This is lovely. It makes me happy. Very Happy
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Post by Hahaha818 2/15/2010, 5:38 pm

Good. It was meant to make people happy Very Happy
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