Beautiful is Autumn

A short poem with a hidden message.

Maturity: Nope.
Fantasy: Nada.



Bathing in the sunlight
Ever tumbling leaves
Always swept in the wind
Under the breezy torrent
Tickling across my face
Itty bitty pieces break off
Flowing through my hair
Ushering their peers to the sky
Lingering in the stars


Ivory lines the silver trees
Shimmering in the moonlight


Altered is the midnight chill
Until it's a masterpiece
Tumbling through my mind
Untarnished in my memory
Mashed in with pointless thought
Never will you ever be forgotten

That's awesome! I see the hidden message, only you forgot the U. XD

See it too, and I agree with Ratt-Kun. Your missing a "U".

XP Whoops. I swear I had it when I first wrote it. Thanks!

Ah, there we go. Awesome!

Haha, thank you! :3

That's really cool! Awesome job.

Thank you!

That's really cool - I found the hidden message, but ti wasn't the first thing I noticed, which is good. That means that it is able to flow without having awkward lettering. Really nice job!

Aw, thank you!