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Post by SaddleClub 4/17/2010, 11:54 pm

Do not sit and cry, my darling
Time will heal all
Look around and watch the leaves change color
Then slowly, gently fall

Oh, darling, do not be sad
The world is full of joy
Look around and see the beauty
That captures each girl and boy

I know times are tough for you
But darling, please just smile
I miss that sparkle in your eyes
It has been gone quite a while

I will plant a flower for you, darling
Though you will never see
It will grow so strong and lovely
So gorgeous and so free

Please wipe that frown off your face
Darling, it breaks my heart
Just seeing you so sad and lonely
Makes me fall apart

I never, ever meant to leave you
But I watch from above
So think of me and dry your tears
My dear darling, my sweet love
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/18/2010, 9:40 am

Saddle, this is beautiful! ^^
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Post by SaddleClub 4/18/2010, 12:46 pm

Thanks

I'm serious about the title, though. I don't know how I wrote it. o.O It just randomly came to me.
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/19/2010, 3:04 pm

Woah. That's actually really cool, then, if you came up with something so beautiful that way. ^^
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Post by SaddleClub 4/19/2010, 8:46 pm

And I just realized it has no contractions. o.O I wonder what was going through my mind when I wrote this.....
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/20/2010, 4:04 pm

It's writers hypnotism! :O You lost yourself in the writing and failed to be your usual self!
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Post by SaddleClub 4/21/2010, 12:40 am

....okay, let's go with that. xD

I feel like this poem could've been written a century or two ago....o.O I'm probably just a weirdo in thinking that, though
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 4/21/2010, 7:46 am

Awwwso sweet
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Post by SaddleClub 4/21/2010, 6:08 pm

Thanks
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Post by FOREIGN?! 4/22/2010, 9:01 am

You should call it 'My Darling'. Very Happy

I really adore this, it's absolutely lovely. :3
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Post by SaddleClub 4/22/2010, 9:49 pm

Oooh, good idea!!

Thanks Smile
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Post by Snow 4/22/2010, 10:44 pm

This is so lovely. ^_^
I feel like I could drift away in this poem's waves of beauty.
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Post by SaddleClub 4/23/2010, 12:47 am

Thanks Smile
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