I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
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I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
Do not sit and cry, my darling
Time will heal all
Look around and watch the leaves change color
Then slowly, gently fall
Oh, darling, do not be sad
The world is full of joy
Look around and see the beauty
That captures each girl and boy
I know times are tough for you
But darling, please just smile
I miss that sparkle in your eyes
It has been gone quite a while
I will plant a flower for you, darling
Though you will never see
It will grow so strong and lovely
So gorgeous and so free
Please wipe that frown off your face
Darling, it breaks my heart
Just seeing you so sad and lonely
Makes me fall apart
I never, ever meant to leave you
But I watch from above
So think of me and dry your tears
My dear darling, my sweet love
Time will heal all
Look around and watch the leaves change color
Then slowly, gently fall
Oh, darling, do not be sad
The world is full of joy
Look around and see the beauty
That captures each girl and boy
I know times are tough for you
But darling, please just smile
I miss that sparkle in your eyes
It has been gone quite a while
I will plant a flower for you, darling
Though you will never see
It will grow so strong and lovely
So gorgeous and so free
Please wipe that frown off your face
Darling, it breaks my heart
Just seeing you so sad and lonely
Makes me fall apart
I never, ever meant to leave you
But I watch from above
So think of me and dry your tears
My dear darling, my sweet love
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Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
Saddle, this is beautiful! ^^
Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
Thanks
I'm serious about the title, though. I don't know how I wrote it. o.O It just randomly came to me.
I'm serious about the title, though. I don't know how I wrote it. o.O It just randomly came to me.
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Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
Woah. That's actually really cool, then, if you came up with something so beautiful that way. ^^
Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
And I just realized it has no contractions. o.O I wonder what was going through my mind when I wrote this.....
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Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
It's writers hypnotism! :O You lost yourself in the writing and failed to be your usual self!
Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
....okay, let's go with that. xD
I feel like this poem could've been written a century or two ago....o.O I'm probably just a weirdo in thinking that, though
I feel like this poem could've been written a century or two ago....o.O I'm probably just a weirdo in thinking that, though
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Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
You should call it 'My Darling'.
I really adore this, it's absolutely lovely. :3
I really adore this, it's absolutely lovely. :3
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Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
Oooh, good idea!!
Thanks
Thanks
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Re: I don't know what to call this (I don't even know how I wrote it....)
This is so lovely. ^_^
I feel like I could drift away in this poem's waves of beauty.
I feel like I could drift away in this poem's waves of beauty.
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