A song I wrote

Now, it's not very good in my opinion. But it's my latest.

P.S. I <3 You

Me and my boyfriend had our first big fight
And I stayed up and texted him last night
You better know what you goin' at
Cause you'll never get me back
He texted me back and as I read the the last lines
I knew that this wasn't a crime

Cause he said P.S. I heart you
Don't you know our love is true
And I could help but laugh
I said boy you sure know more than half
I really wish I knew what to do
Besides said I heart you

WE made up and a few years later
I'm lookin' up at the moon's craters
And how the stars seemed to spell it out
He walked on up looked like he was gonna shout
Then he down on his knees and pulled out a ring
And he said the funniest thing

Cause he said P.S. I heart you
Don't you know our love is true
And I could help but laugh
I said boy you sure know more than half
I really wish I knew what to do
Besides said I heart you

Now I'm walking down the isle with my daddy
I know I've never felt so happy
And when I got to him his face turned red
He pulled out an old love letter and said

Cause he said P.S. I heart you
Honey you know our love is true
And I could help but cry
I said boy you sure know how to try
And make me not know what to do
Oh baby you know it's true
This isn't something new
P.S. I heart you

I do

Marriage

Aww I love it ecspecially the ending and the engadgement lol u just need to change a few said to say I think

Aww, I like it

First of all, pieces you've written yourself need to go in the poetry section. With that in mind, please make sure you add maturity and fantasy ratings to this thread.

Anyway . . . on to the song itself! xD I love it so much. x3 It's so sweet!!

Yes, awww is the right word for this. I picture a country song, and a really sweet music video, with the singer playing a guitar :3 I like it ^^

Aww, that's so sweet. x3
Like others said maturity and fantasy ratings would be good.