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I Promised You Death

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 5/11/2010, 4:12 pm

It's finally time,
THAT YOU LEAVE ME BE.
For a second or two,
OR FOR ETERNITY.

Because I promise you,
THAT NEXT TIME IT'S JUST YOU AND ME
You'll be dead,
YOU'LL SEE.
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Post by Crystal Aura 5/11/2010, 4:26 pm

So, so, so, so, so, so, cool! applause
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/11/2010, 4:33 pm

Very Happy Yay death!

I love the rhyming in this one. x3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 5/11/2010, 4:35 pm

Thanks! :1
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Post by Hyro201 5/11/2010, 4:55 pm

I love dark poems!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 5/11/2010, 5:06 pm

I know you do, Hyro. rolleyes
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Post by Hyro201 5/11/2010, 5:08 pm

I know jsut worth saying again
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Post by Komoda 5/11/2010, 10:24 pm

I love how you can take just a few short sentences and create something dark and ominous, Afi. Excellent work! I love it. :3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 5/12/2010, 7:17 am

Thanks, Mo! ^w^

I just thought of this poem while walking from my bus stop, back home. 'tis not a long walk. 3 mins at max? XPPP
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Post by Novastare 5/12/2010, 11:32 am

Lovely as always Mia! Smile It's so deep that every word is powerful, thats what I love about your poetry. Oh and I had to read this one because you put maturity as average. I was like, WHAT???!!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 5/12/2010, 3:36 pm

Me + poems with Maturity as "average" = Shocking. I know. rolleyes

Anyway, thanks. :3
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