Awaiting Death
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Awaiting Death
by Dark Fairytales 5/29/2010, 11:00 pm
A comet hit
A sounding split
In the sky
It hurt the eye
To see the Moon
So close at noon
To the Earth
A rebirth
The Moon knocked off its orbit
Raising the tides bit by bit
The world is coming to an end
Life is death around the bend
The astronomers were wrong
Now life will soon be gone
New York is flooded
Miami's gone
And so is
My lawn
I am scared,
As life is dared.
Awaiting death,
I lost my breath.
A sounding split
In the sky
It hurt the eye
To see the Moon
So close at noon
To the Earth
A rebirth
The Moon knocked off its orbit
Raising the tides bit by bit
The world is coming to an end
Life is death around the bend
The astronomers were wrong
Now life will soon be gone
New York is flooded
Miami's gone
And so is
My lawn
I am scared,
As life is dared.
Awaiting death,
I lost my breath.
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Re: Awaiting Death
by shadowsowner888 5/30/2010, 9:01 am
:3 Epicness, Alyssa! I really loved those books, didn't you? This is so perfect for them. 
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Re: Awaiting Death
by Dark Fairytales 5/30/2010, 11:40 am
Thanks =] And yes I agree it is perfect for them. I do love those books 
I think this is the best poem I have ever wrote
I think this is the best poem I have ever wrote
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Re: Awaiting Death
by Malicious Nightmares 5/30/2010, 8:10 pm
My favorite part;
You made me laugh. ^,^
Love it! :33
You wrote:And so is
My lawn
You made me laugh. ^,^
Love it! :33
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Re: Awaiting Death
by Dark Fairytales 5/30/2010, 9:17 pm
Thank you guys !! And yes that is my favorite part I got writer's block and couldn't think of anything else ::
I got writer's block and couldn't think of anything else ::
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Re: Awaiting Death
by Arianna 6/1/2010, 2:30 pm
OMG. 
I <3 LAWKI, so yeah, I like this poem, too. Great job.
I <3 LAWKI, so yeah, I like this poem, too. Great job.
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Re: Awaiting Death
by kindro 6/5/2010, 5:23 pm
Ahaa! I love it! I read the first two books, but can't seem to get my hands on the third. Anyways, AWESOME POEM!
Anyways, AWESOME POEM! 
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Re: Awaiting Death
by shadowsowner888 6/6/2010, 1:07 pm
Kinny, I'm with you there! The third . . . gyah, I haven't seen it anywhere but on Amazon. Ari tells me it's really good, though. ._. I feel like I'm missing out on so much, lol.
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