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Even if it Doesn't Make Sense, it Makes Perfect Sense

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Post by B 6/13/2010, 10:35 am

Prolouge:

Many are surprised to know that I'm not normal. On the outside, a normal shell with soft, tan texture and bright blue eyes. Hair that flows down my back that's dark blond with a single pink streak. On the inside, a person filled with hatred, remorse and a small little heart that claims the famous line "I love you."
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Post by B 6/13/2010, 10:35 am

Chapter 1

In the beginning, we weren't able to face our destiny. Vampires couldn't live without hiding. I was one of those that went out and fought. But never came back. Ya' know, being trapped in a small cell with chains hanging on the wall really doesn't help calm yourself. When you sleep, all you feel is fear, hope, selfish thoughts. But I don't think that. Ever. It's making me happy each day to know I'll never face the sun or anybody that hates me ever again. But, I'll never see the one vampire man I loved. So look on the bright side one day, if there ever is one. Never ask 'How are you doing' to me, because I'll just nip at yor neck with a single snap. Ah, the blood.....don't get me started, it's too graphic for the younger minds. "Hey, like, when am I getting out of here?" I screamed smoothly, my voice as flat as a line. "You can't keep me in here forever." Possibly, they can. I couldn't take it anymore, so I broke the chains off the wall and slung them into the wall, then slammed my entire body into it, breaking free.


Chapter 2

I ran as fast as my legs would carry me, just looking straight forward. All I heard were screams of orders, trying to stop me from breaking through this living (Please look at my dictionary! Thank you!) that they imprison many.

*Note, I will need to continue some other time, I'm too busy.*


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Post by shadowsowner888 6/13/2010, 8:41 pm

The beginning is really drawing me in, Smirf. ^^ Keep writing?
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Post by B 6/16/2010, 8:37 pm

Hopefully, if I find time besides gymnastics. I'll post a new chapter later tonight or tommorow.
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