They Call Me Lazuri
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They Call Me Lazuri
by Malicious Nightmares 6/22/2010, 9:14 pm
Maturity; High? Um.. violence?
Fantasy; Beasts..? -unsure-
This has GOT to be my WORSE poem. DX
Fantasy; Beasts..? -unsure-
This has GOT to be my WORSE poem. DX
To all I appear as normal as I should,
But your are the only one to peak beneath my hood.
Because a cloak can not cover what I really am,
Even if you help me and gracefully lend me a hand.
I am a beast of no worth and a being of hate,
Nor do I mean anything to you although I'm your mate.
My heart shan't ever be as cold as yours,
Even in battle when we're going through raging wars.
Today I'd rather just stand at a graveyard with a will to die,
Death is waiting for me and to tell the truth I am not shy.
I'd rather be dead than to show the world,
As I'd like to be scowering in a corner all curled.
I admit that I have a heart with a strong sense of care,
But I still bring to this world their final prayer.
I don't want to be what I am but I just can't help it,
But there's nothing else I can do but to come to admit.
I need your help to save myself this final time,
From my wretched fate and my greatest crime.
I shan't turn to the light nor give up at last,
Because those memories of myself are now quite vast.
My name won't be hidden but told to them all,
Everyone shall know it before I take my final fall.
They call me Lazuri with no pride in the name,
I'm shown no respect and proven without fame.
I'm a beast of no soul nor spirit for a matter,
But my heart's to the point that it's about to shatter.
I've cared for you once and isn't that enough,
All this nonsense of love is just a little too rough.
It's not like you need me today or tomorrow,
And when I die you're proven to show me no sorrow.
I'm covered in scars of my past and present,
I'm torn and I'm shredded as I'm broken and bent.
But your are the only one to peak beneath my hood.
Because a cloak can not cover what I really am,
Even if you help me and gracefully lend me a hand.
I am a beast of no worth and a being of hate,
Nor do I mean anything to you although I'm your mate.
My heart shan't ever be as cold as yours,
Even in battle when we're going through raging wars.
Today I'd rather just stand at a graveyard with a will to die,
Death is waiting for me and to tell the truth I am not shy.
I'd rather be dead than to show the world,
As I'd like to be scowering in a corner all curled.
I admit that I have a heart with a strong sense of care,
But I still bring to this world their final prayer.
I don't want to be what I am but I just can't help it,
But there's nothing else I can do but to come to admit.
I need your help to save myself this final time,
From my wretched fate and my greatest crime.
I shan't turn to the light nor give up at last,
Because those memories of myself are now quite vast.
My name won't be hidden but told to them all,
Everyone shall know it before I take my final fall.
They call me Lazuri with no pride in the name,
I'm shown no respect and proven without fame.
I'm a beast of no soul nor spirit for a matter,
But my heart's to the point that it's about to shatter.
I've cared for you once and isn't that enough,
All this nonsense of love is just a little too rough.
It's not like you need me today or tomorrow,
And when I die you're proven to show me no sorrow.
I'm covered in scars of my past and present,
I'm torn and I'm shredded as I'm broken and bent.
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Re: They Call Me Lazuri
by Malicious Nightmares 6/22/2010, 9:25 pm
Thanks! But I don't like itttt... d:
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Re: They Call Me Lazuri
by Rai 6/22/2010, 11:09 pm
:O
I love this one!
I think it's really amazing. 83
I love this one!
I think it's really amazing. 83 
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Re: They Call Me Lazuri
by Malicious Nightmares 6/23/2010, 8:00 pm
Thanks a lot Noah! I seriously appreciate it. (:
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Re: They Call Me Lazuri
by Malicious Nightmares 6/23/2010, 8:02 pm
Ooh, thanks Hyro! 83
Highly appreciate the comment!
Highly appreciate the comment!
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Re: They Call Me Lazuri
by warriorcatlover 6/24/2010, 9:09 am
Darkness... reflects her perfectly. 
Teloren: *smirk* No respect, eh?
WCL: Oh, Tel, don't act so serious. XD
Teloren: *smirk* No respect, eh?
WCL: Oh, Tel, don't act so serious. XD
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Re: They Call Me Lazuri
by Malicious Nightmares 6/24/2010, 9:12 am
Lazuri; You heard me right. I'm shown no respect...
Mia; ... ): Lazuri, please... D: It's not HIS fault that he doesn't know how to forgive and forget, after you commit the greatest of mistakes...
Lazuri; Right, then who's fault is it? Hm?
Mia; . . . WCL's?
XD
Sorry, WCL. XD
Thanks for the comment, though. 83
Mia; ... ): Lazuri, please... D: It's not HIS fault that he doesn't know how to forgive and forget, after you commit the greatest of mistakes...
Lazuri; Right, then who's fault is it? Hm?
Mia; . . . WCL's?
XD
Sorry, WCL. XD
Thanks for the comment, though. 83
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Re: They Call Me Lazuri
by Komoda 6/24/2010, 12:39 pm
This is beautiful, Mia! I love how you still manage to add romance, despite it being about a cruel character. You made it believable, but not in the slightest bit corny. I really felt sympathy for Lazuri while reading this, like I would for a villain. But I'm babbling, so I'm just going to say: awesome job, Afi! ^^ I loved it.
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