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Post by Puckspaw 7/12/2010, 3:23 pm

I see your broken heart, I hear your strangled cries
I know what your not saying by looking in your eyes
I know that you're hurt, I know that you're broken
I can hear the hidden words that were never spoken

I know that it's hard, and I know how much it hurts
I'm sorry that I couldn't bring any sort of comfort
I wish that there was something, anything, I could do
To take away the sting and help you make it through

But I know that I can't help, that's becoming very clear
As the strangled cries die down, as they change into tears
I can't mend your broken heart, there's nothing I can do
Because, though you may not see, my heart is broken too



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Post by Rai 7/12/2010, 3:29 pm

Woah. *-*
Holy crap, I'm blown away.
I love this, Pucks. Absolutely beautiful, fantastic job. *o*
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Post by Puckspaw 7/12/2010, 3:33 pm

Thanks. This one is a little more personal than my peoms usually are.
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Post by Rai 7/12/2010, 3:37 pm

I'm sorry. D:
If you need someone to talk to, my inbox is always open. Smile
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Post by Puckspaw 7/12/2010, 3:39 pm

Thanks Rai.
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Post by pirox_2012 7/13/2010, 10:08 am

Aww, Brynn!!!!! I *LOVE* it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Puckspaw 7/13/2010, 2:49 pm

Thanks, Tay! =D
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Post by Adrigirl19 7/13/2010, 4:23 pm

This is great. It's amazing.
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Post by Puckspaw 7/13/2010, 5:26 pm

Thank you(:
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