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How Do I Live?

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Post by Elmo 7/21/2010, 11:22 am

How do I live?
You said "I'll love you forever."
Then why did you die?
You flipped my world
In the blink of an eye.

What is happiness?
Its gone from my life.
You left this world
And a greving wife.

I'm dead on the inside-
Just the shell of a woman.
No one can console me.
Only you can.

You're dead and gone.
Your spirit's with God.
My life still goes on,
A happy facade.


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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/21/2010, 11:24 am

Hey, this is really really sweet. :33
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Just one thing, remember to put up the Maturity and Fantasy ratings! wink
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Post by Shadow of the Moon. 7/21/2010, 12:28 pm

Aw, this is sweet. Thanks for sharing it;)
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Post by Elmo 7/21/2010, 2:33 pm

Thanks Mia and Jenna!

I added the Maturity and Fantasy.
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Post by XxLexixX 7/21/2010, 4:57 pm

I like it lotz! : D soo good.
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Post by conich 7/21/2010, 5:39 pm

Very good! Very sweet Smile
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