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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 4:47 pm

This is the not depressing poem I've written. (I've only written 2 poems. XD) Hope you like it. Smile

Sitting there across the isle
Never loses his beautiful smile
Laughs and I almost start, too
But I hold back, so hard to do
He's so close, but so far away
There's so much I wish I could say
He looks at me, dark brown eyes get wider
His beautiful smile gets even brighter
Twinkling eyes stare into mine
I don't even notice the passing of time
His eyes, holding mine, have a mischevous glint
As if he has some secret, and he's letting me in
Not a word spoken, he stands up and leaves
I go the opposite way and silently greive

Okay, so maybe the end is slightly depressing. XD But it's nothing compared to the other one.

Thanks for reading!! Smile

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Post by WordsCanKill 6/8/2009, 5:51 pm

O.O
That's good
I love it; it's really pretty
(:
Keep writing!
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Post by PugsRock 6/8/2009, 5:56 pm

I like it! Smile You should write more poems.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 8:31 pm

Thanks everyone!! Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 9:23 pm

Nice one! Very Happy It's really sweet, even if the ending is kinda sad.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 9:30 pm

Thanks Shadow! Smile I kinda had someone (and something that actually happened) in mind when I wrote it....
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 10:01 pm

Aww, really? That's even sadder then! ):
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Post by iGrievous 6/8/2009, 10:37 pm

It's like a really short, almost pointless story, but still, it's good, I guess poems are just like that.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/9/2009, 12:36 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:Aww, really? That's even sadder then! ):

It's okay, it wasn't anything major.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/9/2009, 12:37 pm

iGrievous wrote:It's like a really short, almost pointless story, but still, it's good, I guess poems are just like that.

Uh, thanks, I guess
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Post by iGrievous 6/9/2009, 12:49 pm

Sorry, if I'm always like saying stuff like that. I didn't expect that poems are so short, and, I guess I was more comparing it to a song probably.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/9/2009, 12:50 pm

Ah, okay
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Post by iGrievous 6/9/2009, 12:55 pm

I'm just so rude, you know? That's the way it comes out.
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/9/2009, 12:59 pm

Try some smileys, Gri! Smile Smileys make the world go round.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/9/2009, 1:08 pm

iGrievous wrote:I'm just so rude, you know? That's the way it comes out.

It's okay. Smile You kinda remind me of my friend.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/9/2009, 1:08 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:Try some smileys, Gri! Smile Smileys make the world go round.

Haha, yep! Smile
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Post by iGrievous 6/9/2009, 1:18 pm

You always post smileys. Razz
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Post by SaddleClub 6/9/2009, 1:25 pm

Cuz they're awesome!! Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile
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Post by iGrievous 6/9/2009, 1:29 pm

So? Mad tongue king afro lol! the joker: jocolor batman: cat burger king: king dairy Queen: queen
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Post by SaddleClub 6/9/2009, 1:36 pm

So awesomeness is....awesome. XD
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Post by Taquito 6/13/2009, 12:18 am

Oooh, I like it! It's really good Smile
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Post by SaddleClub 6/26/2009, 8:24 pm

Banana Muffin wrote:Oooh, I like it! It's really good Smile

Swelcome Smile
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