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Best Friends ~ A Poem/Song/Thingymabob By Myself

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Post by Dragon Lover 8/21/2009, 12:08 pm

I was just sitting around when I heard my little sisters start to sing to, You Belong With Me....It reminded me of my crush, and seconds later it found myself writing. Posted this on the Boy Lover's Club, and shadow suggested I make a thread for it, so here it is....Hope you enjoy it. =)


Best Friends


Whenever you're near,
My heart starts to flutter
Quiet violently.
I feel light and happy,
Like nothing in the world
Could bring me down.
We exchange a few words,
Your smile distracting me
The entire time.
Then we go our separate ways.
Best friends.

I wanna be more than that,
I want you to hold me tight,
Kiss me,
Tell me it'll be alright,
When I'm down and crying.
I want you to be the one
That my heart aches for
Every day and night.
But that won't ever happen,
Because we're just best friends.

I call you every once in a while,
If it weren't for my pride
It'd be every day.
We talk until my throat feels dry,
Laughing at almost everything you say.
Finally you mention a girl,
Who seems perfect for you,
And I think,
What about me?
But I tell you how sweet it is,
And I wish you good luck.
And we hang up.
Best friends.

I wanna be more than that,
I want you to hold me tight,
Kiss me,
Tell me it'll be alright,
When I'm down and crying.
I want you to be the one
That my heart aches for
Every day and night.
But that won't ever happen,
Because we're just best friends.

One year,
One year and we'll met again.
Can I wait that long?
Is it possible for me to wait that long?
One year,
One year and things might be the same again,
Hanging out together again,
Being best friends again.
But I wanna be more than that,
I want you to hold me tight,
Kiss me,
Tell me it'll be alright,
When I'm down and crying.
I want you to be the one
That my heart aches for
Every day and night.
But that won't ever happen,
Because we're just best friends.

But maybe someday, that will change....


Thanks for clicking! =)
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Post by PugsRock 8/21/2009, 1:38 pm

I think it's great. Smile
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Post by Dragon Lover 8/21/2009, 8:55 pm

Thank you, Pugs. =)
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/22/2009, 8:51 am

WOOT! Very Happy *falls in love with poem*

Seriously, do ya think we could put this in TwigBook? x3
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Post by Arianna 8/22/2009, 8:52 am

Wow, that's really good. I hope we can put it in TwigBook!
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Post by Dragon Lover 8/22/2009, 8:53 am

Thanks, both of you! =)

Oh, I'd be honored if you guys did put it in! =)
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Post by Arianna 8/22/2009, 8:55 am

Ooh yay! Thank you so much!
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Post by Dragon Lover 8/22/2009, 9:02 am

smiley You're welcome and thanks, too!
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/22/2009, 9:43 am

Awesome! Very Happy I'll go add it to the list then. What do you want your name to be in the book?
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Post by Dragon Lover 8/22/2009, 9:45 am

My writing name, of course; H. A. Sparrow [inspired by the wicked awesome Jack Sparrow! ♥️]
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/22/2009, 10:00 am

Splendiferous. nod
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Post by Taylor_Potter 8/25/2009, 4:30 pm

Only one thing I can say, Moony, AMMMMMAAAAZZZZZIIIIIINNNNGG!!!! I love it, buddeh! It's great
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Post by Dragon Lover 8/25/2009, 4:50 pm

*giggles* Awwwh, thankies! =) I personally think it's no where near as cool as yours, but....thanks. =)
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Post by Taylor_Potter 8/25/2009, 5:54 pm

Cha! Yours is so much better, it's so sweet!
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Post by iGrievous 8/25/2009, 6:25 pm

Three cheers! cheers cheers cheers
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Post by Dragon Lover 8/25/2009, 7:01 pm

*giggles and blushes* It's true, I guess that's why it's sweet... Embarassed


*Smile* Hehe, thank you, iGri! =)
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Post by Komoda 8/26/2009, 2:06 pm

This is beautiful, DL! I think I read it on the BL Club thread, too.
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Post by Dragon Lover 8/26/2009, 3:30 pm

Thank you, Mo. =)
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Post by Noah the Flood 8/29/2009, 1:01 pm

Awwhhhhhh Smile

I think if he knew the way you felt, then he might think different, but thats just coming from me..
And I really think thats a sweet poem considerign I know the story between you two.
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Post by Nightowl 8/29/2009, 1:22 pm

That's pretty sweet DL. I <3 your writing, so thanks for sharing it. Very Happy
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Post by Dragon Lover 9/4/2009, 12:44 pm

Awwwh, thanks, Sparrow! =)

And, oh, hush up, snakey. xD Jk, but, yes, I know....rolleyes
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Post by rattyjol 9/15/2009, 7:53 pm

That's awesome, but sad.
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Post by Dragon Lover 9/15/2009, 8:28 pm

Thanks! =) And yes, it is...Razz It's kinda meant to be sad.
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Post by Pokadottie 9/16/2009, 9:13 pm

Wow, nice job Dolph! I love it!
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Post by Dragon Lover 9/17/2009, 6:24 am

Thankies, Poka! =)
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