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Post by rattyjol 3/27/2010, 4:47 am

Maturity: A crush; someone gets hit by a car.
Fantasy: None, except that it's totally fiction.

See the boy
Yes, there
Talking to the girl
There's nothing between them
They're Just Friends.

They walk together
Hands at their sides
Fingers brush
Sparks fly
But only she sees.

They say their farewells,
Walk away.
They'll never see each other again.
And so they'll remain
Just Friends.

That very day,
He's walking along,
Doesn't see
The car that takes his future
His promise, his life.

She'll never see
Him again
Doesn't know he's gone
Till it's too late
And so they'll always be

Just Friends.
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/27/2010, 8:01 am

*points at Ratty* You're such a cruel person! D= Why didn't the guy have a chance to see how special they were together, too?!

xD I liked this!
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Post by PugsRock 3/27/2010, 8:04 am

xD Shadow!

I liked it too!!
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Post by rattyjol 3/27/2010, 1:47 pm

Because then they wouldn't be Just Friends. xD

Tanku. nod

Tanku too, Pugs. Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/28/2010, 8:40 am

Then I think something needs to change. They should be Not Just Friends. *stern nod*

xD Swelcome.
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Post by Avé 3/28/2010, 9:52 am

Ratty, that's so unfair. I agree with Shadow. xD

Anyway, I love this. Nice job, as always. Very Happy
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Post by Selene Hime 3/28/2010, 10:48 am

*Huggles them.* Amazing poem, Ratty. It had tons of emotion in it.
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Post by rattyjol 3/28/2010, 2:00 pm

But he's dead. xD

Thankies, Ave and Selene. Very Happy
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