Friends Are Lies

Maturity; Average
Fantasy; Low
This may just be my last poem.

When one may laugh,
The other may cry.
They call one a half,
'Till they say goodbye.

Friendship never lasts,
No matter how long.
Some have great pasts,
While some were wrong.

You'll be torn away,
After one simple word.
You'll be a stray,
You won't be heard.

Together forever,
Impossible, however.
Together you cry?
Friends are lies.

I couldn't agree more with this poem, really... Beautiful job, Afi. I really loved it! I hope this isn't your last poem, because I really enjoy your poetry.

Right, thanks Mo.
But it may be my last.
Unless a "friend" of mine gives me more inspiration.
Like for this poem.

;-;
This is really sad, but its a lovely poem.
As Komoda said: I really hope this isn't your last poem. Your poetry is wonderful.

Thanks, RoadMorgFlorg. [Or however I wrote it, before.]

RoarMorgFlorg, maybe? x3
But I'm really sorry that this happened to you. Whoever would turn you down, or decide not to be your friend, is not worth it. You're an amazing person, Mia, and anyone who would do anything like this poem to you, really doesn't get you. It's their loss.

*huggles*

Oops. Accidentally typed the wrong thing.
Can't exactly see my keyboard, perfectly.

But it's all my fault...

Hmmm, well, I guess I don't really know the situation. But just try to work it out, if you really feel like the other person is worth it. That's pretty much all the advice I can give you, since I'm a sucky motivational speaker/advice giver.

I just hope somehow it works out for you, harmonicaeater. I'm sorry anyways.

No one can trust me, anymore.
It's just not worth it.
-sigh-

*shakes head* what have i done to deserve being the inspiration of this poem mia?

*hides in corner, crying quietly*

oh well take out whatever anger you have on me i guess it would be better than taking it out on someone else.

Awww, beautiful Mia, I really hope this isn't your last.

Mia, i love this. ^^

i would give you some advice with your friend but i heard from a little birdie that you worked it out.

i hope its not your last... ur dark poetry is EPIC. ^^

Hyro201 wrote:oh well take out whatever anger you have on me i guess it would be better than taking it out on someone else.

Sorry for what happened, Hyro. D:

@Reeses;
Little birdie? O-o *glares at Kitkat*
Right then. Anyway, some advice for next time is much appreciated right now. :3

And thanks to both of ya!
This was just a minute or two poem, though.

Alrighty then ^^ lol i'll message you. in the meen time kitkat will be killing me XD

Yay! Kitkat'll be killing you!
JK. 'Cause that's a bad thing. XD
You two having been my first WI friends. :3

yeah, woot woot! yay for kitkat killing me!

wait what?

XD lol

*shifty eyes*
I is no little birdy! D: I am a... volcanic magical birdy! >D
*takes out knife*
Mia, shall we kill her?
I will! 8D
*glares at Reeses*
Nah, Reeses had been over at my house at the time. She was eavesdropping. >.>

Back on topic? O.o

This may be a little late, but I love this poem!

Thanks, Anna. C:

You're welcome.