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Post by DiscardedHarmony 5/15/2010, 11:36 pm

i will teach you how to breathe,
and my instructions will lead
to suffocation. i will run your
fingers through a gauntlet of
hissing blades, and tell you
that you will awaken with felt-
coated insides. i will scream
my lies from rooftops and
assure you that everything
is alright. i will find the cracks
in my armor and let you think
that you're exploiting me,
while really grinding the ashes
of your purity into the tear-
wet ground. i will swallow
your words and run them
through the rain until they
shrink like the fleeces of
sheep, and reveal the rotten
core of everything we stood for.

i will tell you you're beautiful and then devour the remains.
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Post by Komoda 5/16/2010, 12:57 am

Wow... This is amazing, Harmony. You're such a talented poet... You have a way of rendering me speechless each time I read these. I don't know how you do it, but you manage to have the best metaphors and you always choose the most obscure yet perfectly descriptive words. :3 Excellent job!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 5/16/2010, 1:00 am

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Thank you so much :3
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Post by Komoda 5/16/2010, 1:00 am

You're very welcome! Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/16/2010, 8:50 am

Dude, you're such a good poet. o_O That's it, I'm nominating you for featured member because I so wanna see you win. Just nominating one of your poems isn't enough.
(And yes, this is the first time I've ever nominated a member. :O)
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Post by Arianna 5/16/2010, 9:21 am

Your poems are seriously amazing. Very Happy

*is jealous*
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 5/16/2010, 2:32 pm

And this isn't even one I liked that much. Scream Lies From Rooftops 812483
Thank you everyone Very Happy
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