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Post by shadowsowner888 11/30/2009, 10:58 pm

Yeah . . . :3
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 12/1/2009, 8:57 pm

LOL, I was thinking about that, too =)
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Post by twilighter3000 12/2/2009, 7:19 am

lol, we're so addicted. Sorry I haven't written more in the past couple of days, I've been overloaded with HW! I'll write more when I can!
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Post by catbuster 12/2/2009, 12:46 pm

Haha, no worries Danielle we all have school and we all know how much HW overloads into our lives!
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 12/2/2009, 6:58 pm

I know '_' Take your time Very Happy
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Post by twilighter3000 12/2/2009, 8:40 pm

Mmkay, thanks guys! I'll try to write more tonight, but IDK...
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Post by twilighter3000 12/9/2009, 3:13 pm

I'm writing more of Luke's perspective right now! I'll try to get a chapter up later!
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/9/2009, 6:48 pm

Awesome! :3 I can't wait!
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 12/9/2009, 8:06 pm

Yay!! I can't wait!! ^___^
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Post by twilighter3000 12/9/2009, 8:12 pm

kk, I'll write the rest of the chapter now! I wrote most of it earlier, but didn't have time to finish it... Razz I'll get right on it! lol, I'm in high demand!
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Post by twilighter3000 12/9/2009, 8:33 pm

kk, it's up where the old chapter 6 was! Check the table of contents if you need to!
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/9/2009, 10:08 pm

That was awesome! Smile Lol, Luke's awesome. xD He's not a jerk like other dudes, even in his own head!

One suggestion, though . . .
He said, and I swear I heard Lizzie sigh as Sarah giggled quietly.
In this line, I couldn't really figure out whether Lizzie was sighing with infatuation or disgust. So when you edit, maybe you could define that more clearly? Smile
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Post by catbuster 12/9/2009, 10:57 pm

Cool, I really like the latest part!
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Post by twilighter3000 12/10/2009, 10:55 am

shadowsowner888 wrote:That was awesome! Smile Lol, Luke's awesome. xD He's not a jerk like other dudes, even in his own head!

One suggestion, though . . .
He said, and I swear I heard Lizzie sigh as Sarah giggled quietly.
In this line, I couldn't really figure out whether Lizzie was sighing with infatuation or disgust. So when you edit, maybe you could define that more clearly? Smile

Thanks for pointing that out! I wasn't really paying attention as I wrote yesterday, so I'm sure there are a few more mistakes then usual!

Thanks M!
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/10/2009, 5:45 pm

Smile You're welcome.
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Post by twilighter3000 12/14/2009, 4:44 pm

Hey guys, just to let you know, I probably won't be able to write much, [or be on much at all] in the next week or so because I'll be super busy! I have the first of my auditions for our high school's musical since they need a younger part, studying for our school spelling bee, [a lot of pressure, since I've won every year prior] and just keeping up my straight A's, which isn't easy to begin with! So sorry guys, but I won't write any more of this 'til Christmas break starts! Razz
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Post by catbuster 12/14/2009, 5:32 pm

Awww, well that's ok christmas break isn't to far away!
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/14/2009, 7:30 pm

Aw, all right! Razz Good luck with all your school stuff.
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Post by twilighter3000 12/14/2009, 9:15 pm

Yeah, though if I make the top 2 for my school spelling bee, [a 99% chance since I have every year before] I'll have to keep studying, but I'm sure I'll have a slight break around Christmas! lol

Thanks Shadz!
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Post by Doodles 12/27/2009, 2:23 am

Whoa, it's really cool how you wrote a part for Luke, I like his attitude to the world. He's experienced but not, you know? No, you probably don't. Anyway, you should definitely get writing more quickly!
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Post by twilighter3000 12/29/2009, 12:57 pm

lol, thanks, I'll try to write more soon, though right now I'm focusing on trying to write the first chapter of my titleless story!
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Post by twilighter3000 1/22/2010, 3:59 pm

Chapter 8 from Luke's POV is up on page 20, post 8! Sorry for the long wait guys!
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/23/2010, 9:34 am

Sweet job! ^^ Lol, I think Luke might have said something a little weird, though . . .

“Mrs. _____ thinks Lizzie broke my nose.”
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Post by catbuster 1/23/2010, 11:18 am

Awesome job I love it!
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Post by twilighter3000 1/23/2010, 7:24 pm

lol, whoops, I kinda just copied and pasted some of it, and must have missed that! Thanks for pointing it out! Smile

Thanks M!
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