Re: Hallelujah *Not finished* Chapter 11 From Luke's Perspective is up!

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/26/2009, 8:04 pm

OMG I just read the first post and its AMAZING!!! I love it! I have to go read the rest now grin

by twilighter3000 11/28/2009, 12:40 pm

Thanks Jen! Tell me what you think of the rest once you read it!

by twilighter3000 11/28/2009, 1:16 pm

Hey guys, should make a whole separate thread for Luke's point of view? IDK exactly what to do...

by **shadowsowner888** 11/28/2009, 2:02 pm

I'd kinda like to see it as part of the same story . . . Very Happy

by twilighter3000 11/28/2009, 8:58 pm

Yeah, I was thinking that too... I'd just delete Lizzie's view for that chapter, and put Luke's in then! I mean, I have it saved in Word, so if I needed to see it again, I could... I have part of chapter 2 written from Luke's point of view! I'm gonna write more now that my friend went home!

by twilighter3000 11/28/2009, 9:50 pm

Check it out! The first chapter from Luke's perspective is up!

by **rattyjol** 11/28/2009, 10:01 pm

Where? I can't find it.

by twilighter3000 11/28/2009, 10:14 pm

It's where Lizzie's chapter 2 used to be, on the first post!

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/28/2009, 11:19 pm

Woot I just finished =) I didn't read Luke's point of view, yet. =D

Also, just fyi (incase you write more), your nose turns this wierd yellow greenish color and you get dark circles under your eyes. Sadly, I know from exprience Razz

by **shadowsowner888** 11/29/2009, 9:25 am

That was sweeeeet! Very Happy

Haha, it's so awesome to get his perspective . . .

by twilighter3000 11/29/2009, 12:12 pm

Awesome! Did you like it? *Crosses fingers*

Thanks! Aww, that stinks for you. lol

Thanks Shadz! I know, it gives so much more controversy to the story! I'm so excited to write more!

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/29/2009, 1:43 pm

I just read Luke's part =)

I LOVED IT!!! *crosses fingers that you will write more*

by twilighter3000 11/29/2009, 1:58 pm

Thanks so much! I'm glad you guys like it so much! lol, yup, I'm gonna write more right now!

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/29/2009, 2:25 pm

Yay!!

Great work, by the way Wink

by twilighter3000 11/29/2009, 3:25 pm

Thanks! More is up on page 1, post 10, section in orange!

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/29/2009, 4:22 pm

I'll go read it now Very Happy

by twilighter3000 11/29/2009, 5:31 pm

Was it good? I kinda wrote it in a hurry...

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/29/2009, 5:32 pm

Yes, it was good =) Very good! Its fun seeing another character's point of view nod

by catbuster 11/29/2009, 6:40 pm

I like the chapters from Luke's perspective! Sorry I'm so late to comment I haven't had time to read it recently! But I loved the chapter, more soon pwaese!!

by twilighter3000 11/29/2009, 9:18 pm

Thanks! I'll write more as soon as I can! Unfortunately school starts again tomorrow, so I won't have as much time to write... Razz

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/30/2009, 8:10 pm

Ah yeah, school takes up a lot of time Mad

Also, just some info for your story (again, LOL), practically your whole face is swollen, even if you keep ice on it all the time smug

And the black eyes go away about 2 weeks later and same with the wierd color of the nose, and same with the swelling.

Very Happy

by twilighter3000 11/30/2009, 9:04 pm

I know... *Sigh*

Thanks! It's good you guys are telling me all this stuff, cuz then I won't have to do as much research on the internet!

by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/30/2009, 9:32 pm

LOL Let me know if I can help you out with anymore info you need Very Happy

by **shadowsowner888** 11/30/2009, 9:57 pm

Yay!

That new part was great. I love his chapter titles, lol . . . reminds me of Jacob's in Breaking Dawn. xD

by twilighter3000 11/30/2009, 10:04 pm

Mmkay, I will!

Thanks Shadz! lol, I know, right? That's kinda what I was thinking of when I made them! At first I wasn't really planning on it, but it seemed like something a guy would do, lol!

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