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Post by Jade 9/5/2009, 2:20 pm

Rain. It hits the window's fogged up glass,
Just to slither down, leaving a trail of wet bleakness behind it.
Reminding me, the winter is real. That summer, no longer is.

The liquid pools up in the street, on the sidewalk, anywhere the wind throws it.
A car passes by, sending waves of fallen rain to the curb.
A person walks by, the rain hitting their umbrella, wanted to soak their hair and clothes.

Outside is grey, as if the rain has washed away all the color.
The sky is nothing but clouds, waiting down with more rain.
I sit and listen to the stormy world and feel glad that I'm inside and that my hair is wet because of my shower and not because of the


Rain.
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Post by Nightowl 9/5/2009, 6:49 pm

Nice job. Very Happy
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Post by Jade 9/6/2009, 12:39 am

Thanks Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/6/2009, 8:31 am

I like it! ^^
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Post by Boballoo123 9/6/2009, 9:52 am

Good job! Smile
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Post by Jade 9/6/2009, 1:56 pm

Short answers xD

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Post by merry312 9/12/2009, 3:12 pm

OMGeezers! I love it! Very Happy Awesome job! Smile I love the part: It hits the window's fogged up glass,
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Post by Jade 9/12/2009, 3:39 pm

Thanks, Merry Very Happy
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Post by merry312 9/12/2009, 5:24 pm

No problemo! Wink
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Post by Komoda 9/12/2009, 11:59 pm

Ooh, I love this!
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Post by rattyjol 9/13/2009, 3:00 am

Cool. Smile
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Post by Jade 9/13/2009, 6:25 pm

Thankies Ratty Very Happy
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