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Post by xSophiexx16 9/24/2009, 3:09 pm

...
So..
Another depressingish poem.
Very Happy
It's very odd how often I make these sad poems.
I don't imagine myself as a sad person.
or a very angry person...
But- here it is.
It is more like a song, I guess.
When I wrote it- I was singing it in my head.


You and I would fight and scream
Forgot we were on the same team
And in the end we forgot
The reasons we even fought.

The fights continued, night and day.
Ev’rything has to go your way.
When’ll you think about what you say?
Soon our friendship will decay.

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What do we fight for?
Through the Seasons
We just fight more and more.

One plus One will always equal two.
But I am a zero to you.
When will you get the sum?
What have we become?

There are two of us, not just one.
This life we lead is no more fun.
You need to stop the ways you’ve been.
Then we both will truly win.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/25/2009, 4:24 pm

Awesome job, Soph! x3 I love this part, especially -
One plus One will always equal two.
But I am a zero to you.
When will you get the sum?
What have we become?
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 2:21 am

That was awesome! Very Happy
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Post by xSophiexx16 9/28/2009, 1:46 pm

Thanks!
I'm sorry if the beat doesn't really work.
I made a bunch of
like...

:What have we-ee-eeh- become?" S
happen in it.
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Post by merry312 9/29/2009, 8:58 am

Nice Job Sophie! Very Happy I like this part:

There are two of us, not just one.
This life we lead is no more fun.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/29/2009, 3:51 pm

You're welcome! x3
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Post by xSophiexx16 10/2/2009, 4:35 pm

Thanks, Merry (:
I wanted to use arithmetic.
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I think Lewis Carrol and the Beatles have both done it and I loved the parts with it..
So... I did it.
XD
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Post by Taylor_Potter 10/3/2009, 8:55 pm

That's a great job! I love it!
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Post by xSophiexx16 10/4/2009, 1:53 am

Thanks, Taylor Potter!
By the way- I love Harry Potter (:
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Post by Taylor_Potter 10/4/2009, 8:06 am

Yesh! Another fan! xD
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Post by xSophiexx16 10/5/2009, 2:57 pm

XD

Yeah! I made my sister a fan too.
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And my brother was a fan.


I love the books *makes a heart with hands*


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I think we have to stay on topic,though.
SO- Forgive me for replying.
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Post by Jade 10/10/2009, 7:29 pm

Great Poem!! I can never rhyme, but it's always fun to read good poems that can. A lot of the people in my class, if were assigned, to write a rhyming poem would compose something like this:

I have a Cat
My Cat's name is Matt
It likes to catch Rats.
Matt is a good cat!

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Post by xSophiexx16 10/12/2009, 11:39 am

XD.
Thank you very much (:

That's not bad!
I just say a sentence that I like
then find a word that rhymes with it
then some how make it the last word of the next sentence so it rhymes ;D
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Post by littletoes101 10/12/2009, 11:42 am

Wow, cool! If you write more stuff i'll definatley take a look!
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Post by xSophiexx16 10/13/2009, 4:56 pm

Thanks, littletoes101!
I have a lot of small stories saved and I might share them on TWG, I'm not sure- but maybe you can read those if you want. Thanks so much!
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