It All Started With Life
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It All Started With Life
It all started with life.
As cold as death you would know,
As thick and red the blood could flow,
As thick and red the blood could flow,
It started in the midst of night
Though all it really was, was a fight
All but one knew what it would cause
Liable promises of the laws
Lovely night for a fall
Slithering slanderer of the dark
Try as you might we will not break
Although our all lives are at stake
Rebel angel tell me why
To lure us away from the light
Even though your attempt may be in vain
Do try, dear friend, to stop our plight
Without our guide we are left
In the blackness that is our sin
There, the darkness starts off as small as a pin
Here me now, and take heed
Let me speak to you right now
It is what you sow you shall reap
For even though you may weep
Every corner something may creep
Though all it really was, was a fight
All but one knew what it would cause
Liable promises of the laws
Lovely night for a fall
Slithering slanderer of the dark
Try as you might we will not break
Although our all lives are at stake
Rebel angel tell me why
To lure us away from the light
Even though your attempt may be in vain
Do try, dear friend, to stop our plight
Without our guide we are left
In the blackness that is our sin
There, the darkness starts off as small as a pin
Here me now, and take heed
Let me speak to you right now
It is what you sow you shall reap
For even though you may weep
Every corner something may creep
As cold as death I would know,
As thick and red as my blood could flow.
As thick and red as my blood could flow.
It all ended with death.
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Re: It All Started With Life
Cool! Nice job.
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Re: It All Started With Life
Wow, this is amazing! I love the formatting and the poem itself is incredible! Awesome word choice, too.
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Re: It All Started With Life
Thanks so much peeps!
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Re: It All Started With Life
Wow, that's awesome.
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Re: It All Started With Life
That. Was. EPIC. And very professionalistic--is that a word? If not, then it just became one, xD
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Re: It All Started With Life
Thanks you, people!
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Re: It All Started With Life
[gush]Brrr! That's creepily awesome I adore the bold title spelling out thingie. I love the two offset couplets at the top and bottom; very nice. And your word choice is fantastic! [/gush]
Re: It All Started With Life
Thanks so much everyone who has commented!
I, myself, thought this was the most epic fails of all epic fails... xD]
I, myself, thought this was the most epic fails of all epic fails... xD]
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Re: It All Started With Life
This was no epic fail.
An epic fail would be saying you're writing a poem about pie and instead writing 3.14159265. xD
But the reality is, what I just said is an epic fail of trying to explain an epic fail.
An epic fail would be saying you're writing a poem about pie and instead writing 3.14159265. xD
But the reality is, what I just said is an epic fail of trying to explain an epic fail.
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Re: It All Started With Life
I love it! Ecspecially how it spells it out
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Re: It All Started With Life
Wow.
That's amazing!
Great, Great job!
You're my poem nomination for featureds.
That's amazing!
Great, Great job!
You're my poem nomination for featureds.
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Re: It All Started With Life
thank you sooo much, peoples!!
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Re: It All Started With Life
thank you peopleeee!
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Swelcome. ^^ (Lol, whether that thank you was really for me or not, I'm still saying it. xD)
Re: It All Started With Life
Thanks peoples who nominated/voted for this!
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Re: It All Started With Life
This is crazy good, really O.o, I love it!!
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