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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/14/2010, 7:54 pm

Dreams
Beyond
Death

Do not forget
Your dreams
That cross the land
Dreams that follow you
Even after death

Can you see
What lies beyond your dreams
What seeks to kill
And what seeks to help

Those who sacrifice themselves
To keep you alive
And others that love you
For who you are

Do you remember
Who your parents were
And the friends you've had
The way they all trusted you

Betraying them
Murdering them
And breaking their hearts in two
Leaving them alone to fend for themselves

Your sins have followed you
Your dreams have never ended
Your nightmares were real
Must you truly regret it

Trusting your surroundings or not
Isn't what its all about
Its about you and your dreams
And how they follow you around

Your dreams
They follow you forever
And even
After Death

Your dreams are beyond death


Last edited by Miafire on 3/11/2010, 8:04 am; edited 3 times in total
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Post by warriorcatlover 1/14/2010, 8:17 pm

WHOO!! Beastly poem!! And I love how you made Death capitalized. XD *nudge nudge*

No less than what I can expect from the great Miafire! Very Happy *hugs*
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/14/2010, 8:24 pm

XD

Count Miafire. smug Heh, heh. ^w^

Thank you, WCL. smiley
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Post by rattyjol 1/14/2010, 8:44 pm

Whoa. o.0 Awesome poem. Love the formatting. nod
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/14/2010, 8:58 pm

Thank you, Ratt-Sama!
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/15/2010, 6:20 pm

I agree with Ratty on the formatting. Very Happy It's epic! And the poem is one of your typical masterpieces. x3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/16/2010, 2:10 pm

Aw, thanks! smiley
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Post by Crystal Aura 1/16/2010, 2:19 pm

Cool. Cool
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/16/2010, 2:21 pm

Thank you. :1
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Post by Komoda 1/16/2010, 11:27 pm

I LOVE this one, Mia! It's almost... Hopeful. Very Happy But ominous at the same time... Spectacular job.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 1/17/2010, 12:23 am

Dude... o.O That was epic. I agree, I adore the formatting ^^ ANOTHER spectacular one :3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/17/2010, 5:32 pm

Thank you, both!! =1
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Post by wolflover96 1/17/2010, 6:29 pm

really epic! :3 awesome job! Dreams Beyond Death 899677
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/17/2010, 11:09 pm

Thank you, very much!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/17/2010, 8:17 am

Oops. I realized that I had a typo. XD Fixed it!

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Post by Novastare 2/19/2010, 10:35 pm

Oh my gosh!! Ur a mastermind!! Let me guess genius at birth? XD Love the way that it flows, normally I'm all about the rhyming, but your poem seems to flow with every sentence. Love it!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/20/2010, 11:01 am

Thank you, very much!
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