In My Dreams
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In My Dreams
I fell asleep
In the middle of the day
Life went on
As I slept away
In my dreams
I was on a boat
Looking around
At the things out afloat
There were birds of all kinds
Lilly-pads and frogs
There was a cabin on the shore
Made comepletely from logs
As I watched
The view started to change
To something different
It was very strange
I was standing alone
In a forest of green
Trees so tall
The tops unseen
There was noise all around
The source hard to find
I looked left and right
And found it after a time
It was a few little monkeys
With eyes so big
As soon as they saw me
They started to do a jig
Then things changed again
There was snow all around
I looked around me
It covered every inch of ground
The whole place was beautiful
From the snow-covered ground
To the frozen pond
And the sun going down
I woke with a start
Just to see
My sisters and brother
Standing over me
They told me I had been
Talking in my sleep
Saying things like,
"What beautiful sheep!"
It didn't make sense
Even to me
For there had been no sheep
In my dream
In the middle of the day
Life went on
As I slept away
In my dreams
I was on a boat
Looking around
At the things out afloat
There were birds of all kinds
Lilly-pads and frogs
There was a cabin on the shore
Made comepletely from logs
As I watched
The view started to change
To something different
It was very strange
I was standing alone
In a forest of green
Trees so tall
The tops unseen
There was noise all around
The source hard to find
I looked left and right
And found it after a time
It was a few little monkeys
With eyes so big
As soon as they saw me
They started to do a jig
Then things changed again
There was snow all around
I looked around me
It covered every inch of ground
The whole place was beautiful
From the snow-covered ground
To the frozen pond
And the sun going down
I woke with a start
Just to see
My sisters and brother
Standing over me
They told me I had been
Talking in my sleep
Saying things like,
"What beautiful sheep!"
It didn't make sense
Even to me
For there had been no sheep
In my dream
Last edited by Hahaha818 on 3/10/2010, 7:30 pm; edited 1 time in total
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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Re: In My Dreams
Thats an awesome poem.
SkyLight- Short Short Maker
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Re: In My Dreams
Beautiful flow of the rhymes, I like the description too it takes me to different worlds. Love it, keep up the good work!
Novastare- Novella Composer
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Re: In My Dreams
That was great. Dreams are odd. Mine are... beyond odd. o.o Excellent job!
FOREIGN?!- Novel Creator
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Re: In My Dreams
Thanks guys!!! Oh and to Nova in case you didn't see this on your "Hey, I'm new here": OMG!!!! I KNOW YOU!!!
Puckspaw- Novelette Scribe
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Re: In My Dreams
Sorry. That last comment was from me. I forgot to log out my sister. Whoops!
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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Age : 27
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