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In My Dreams

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Post by Hahaha818 2/17/2010, 8:14 pm

I fell asleep
In the middle of the day
Life went on
As I slept away

In my dreams
I was on a boat
Looking around
At the things out afloat

There were birds of all kinds
Lilly-pads and frogs
There was a cabin on the shore
Made comepletely from logs

As I watched
The view started to change
To something different
It was very strange

I was standing alone
In a forest of green
Trees so tall
The tops unseen

There was noise all around
The source hard to find
I looked left and right
And found it after a time

It was a few little monkeys
With eyes so big
As soon as they saw me
They started to do a jig

Then things changed again
There was snow all around
I looked around me
It covered every inch of ground

The whole place was beautiful
From the snow-covered ground
To the frozen pond
And the sun going down

I woke with a start
Just to see
My sisters and brother
Standing over me

They told me I had been
Talking in my sleep
Saying things like,
"What beautiful sheep!"

It didn't make sense
Even to me
For there had been no sheep
In my dream


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Post by shadowsowner888 2/17/2010, 8:21 pm

Nice job. x3 Dreams rock.
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Post by SkyLight 2/17/2010, 10:20 pm

Thats an awesome poem. Smile
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Post by Novastare 2/18/2010, 2:03 am

Beautiful flow of the rhymes, I like the description too it takes me to different worlds. Love it, keep up the good work! farao
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/18/2010, 2:28 pm

That was great. Very Happy Dreams are odd. Mine are... beyond odd. o.o Excellent job!
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Post by Puckspaw 2/18/2010, 5:03 pm

Thanks guys!!! Oh and to Nova in case you didn't see this on your "Hey, I'm new here": OMG!!!! I KNOW YOU!!!
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Post by Hahaha818 2/18/2010, 5:04 pm

Sorry. That last comment was from me. I forgot to log out my sister. Whoops!
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Post by Novastare 2/19/2010, 8:56 pm

Really? From where??
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Post by Puckspaw 2/21/2010, 3:24 pm

She's my sister
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