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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/20/2010, 11:38 pm

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Death people fear
Death people wish could be avoided
Death people hate to see happen

The beauty of death
Death holds afterlife
Everyone's invited

Choosing the Heaven or the place know one wants to go
Why?
God is he real?
Questions people constantly think about

Tears are what you see after death
The cold wet silky tears
Why?

Death will be a experience eveyone will experiences
Thats one thing all humans will hold waiting into there futures of life


Death is as beautiful as a rose
The bright red petals represent the bold color of death
The sharp thorns represent how each person has died
The steam of the rose follows to the afterlife ahead of us

Death beauty
We will all be reunited eventually
No matter what you belive in or happens

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~Represents Death In All Of Us~


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Post by Avé 1/20/2010, 11:45 pm

Ooh... this is lovely writing, Brooke. It really is. Nice job. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/21/2010, 2:26 pm

Beautiful job, Brook! ^^ You did so well . . . :3
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/21/2010, 3:12 pm

Thanks we began writing poems in school and I added good details in all of my poems. So everyone is making me help them with there poems! Lol.
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Post by Arianna 1/21/2010, 3:42 pm

So... Uh, I won't go to Heaven, 'cause I don't believe?
*notices argument will start, shuts up*
Anyway, nice poem. Smile
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/21/2010, 3:51 pm

I don't belive in Heaven either.
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Post by Arianna 1/21/2010, 3:54 pm

No, just 'cause of the last line. xD
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/22/2010, 3:49 pm

I changed the last part a little bit.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/29/2010, 4:35 pm

I think I might write another poem similar to this one I wrote.
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/29/2010, 5:33 pm

You should! ^^ You have good poetry.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 1/29/2010, 6:22 pm

Thanks!Smile
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