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Post by Dark Fairytales 5/29/2010, 11:00 pm

A comet hit
A sounding split
In the sky
It hurt the eye
To see the Moon
So close at noon
To the Earth
A rebirth

The Moon knocked off its orbit
Raising the tides bit by bit
The world is coming to an end
Life is death around the bend
The astronomers were wrong
Now life will soon be gone

New York is flooded
Miami's gone
And so is
My lawn

I am scared,
As life is dared.
Awaiting death,
I lost my breath.
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/30/2010, 9:01 am

:3 Epicness, Alyssa! I really loved those books, didn't you? This is so perfect for them. applause
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Post by Dark Fairytales 5/30/2010, 11:40 am

Thanks =] And yes I agree it is perfect for them. I do love those books Razz I think this is the best poem I have ever wrote
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 5/30/2010, 8:10 pm

My favorite part;

You wrote:And so is
My lawn

You made me laugh. ^,^

Love it! :33
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Post by Crystal Aura 5/30/2010, 8:18 pm

Simply outstanding! applause
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Post by Dark Fairytales 5/30/2010, 9:17 pm

Thank you guys !! And yes that is my favorite part Razz I got writer's block and couldn't think of anything else ::
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Post by Orodruin 5/31/2010, 5:38 pm

Really good ^^ I like it!!

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Post by Dark Fairytales 5/31/2010, 5:45 pm

Thank you =]
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Post by Arianna 6/1/2010, 2:30 pm

OMG. Very Happy I <3 LAWKI, so yeah, I like this poem, too. Great job.
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Post by Dark Fairytales 6/1/2010, 9:52 pm

Thanks =]
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Post by kindro 6/5/2010, 5:23 pm

Ahaa! I love it! I read the first two books, but can't seem to get my hands on the third. Razz Anyways, AWESOME POEM! Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/6/2010, 1:07 pm

Kinny, I'm with you there! The third . . . gyah, I haven't seen it anywhere but on Amazon. Ari tells me it's really good, though. ._. I feel like I'm missing out on so much, lol.
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